Comment from Sugarray77

Excellent

Great choice of words and a good description and choice of topic. The contrast was good and fit the scenario well. Good job. Regards. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 28-Dec-2017

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reply by the author on 29-Dec-2017

Thanks for the read and the comments.

Comment from Geeps

Excellent

Hello there. I really liked your poem for this writing prompt. It reminds me of some of the best parts of winter and snow, especially when I was young. Now it means shoveling the car out at 5 in the morning and dangerous roads. :( Thanks for sharing!

 Comment Written 26-Dec-2017

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reply by the author on 27-Dec-2017

Thanks for the read and the comments. Be careful out there on those roads.

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

This is a fun sedoka contest entry. Good job on its style. The picture is adorable. I imagine many can identify with our words either as a mom or a child, Thanks for sharing. Jan

 Comment Written 26-Dec-2017

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reply by the author on 27-Dec-2017

Thank you for your read and the comments.

Comment from Ellie707

Excellent

I like the title which matches the picture which backs up and supports the poem.

Strong imagery brings back fond memories of winter and snow time.

Good job!

Ellie

 Comment Written 26-Dec-2017

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reply by the author on 27-Dec-2017

Thank you for the read and your comments. Glad to have stirred some good memories.

reply by Ellie707 on 27-Dec-2017

You're welcome!