Comment from jenintorre

Excellent

I enjoyed your great little story Maria about George and Luke. It had a very good surprise ending. Best wishes and a Happy New year. Jen.

 Comment Written 27-Dec-2017

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reply by the author on 27-Dec-2017

Thanks for reading. Happy New Year to you too.

Comment from w.j.debi

Excellent

An adorable story. I'll bet kids would love this and it makes a good point about cleanliness. Nice twist at the end letting us know about the pig and the cat. It makes it fun to read a second time knowing their perspectives

 Comment Written 26-Dec-2017

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reply by the author on 27-Dec-2017

Thanks for your review.

Comment from smileycloud

Excellent

this is so cute and the closing lines are truly delightful and definitely unexpected
your well written story also carries a very strong message about being satisfied and not thinking that there is greener grass elsewhere
blessings my friend
have a smiley day
Lorraine

 Comment Written 26-Dec-2017

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reply by the author on 27-Dec-2017

Thanks for reading. Have a lovely day.

Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Excellent

Watch out what you wish for and this is done in quite a differnet twist at the end and one that really made me stop and think, not only of the pig and the cat...but us

 Comment Written 26-Dec-2017

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reply by the author on 27-Dec-2017

Thanks for reading, Barb. Have a nice day.

Comment from Dan Diego

Excellent

Sneaky smart writing. To me, this started as a children's story. I thought the word choice and rhythm were targeted for younger audiences. But that had no impact on my enjoyment. It reads like a fable. And the moral in the end jolts the reader out of their expectations. I didn't see any errors. The art supports the theme. And the takeaway is like a little reminder that things aren't always what they seem. I enjoyed this story.

 Comment Written 26-Dec-2017

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reply by the author on 27-Dec-2017

Thanks for your review, Dan.

Comment from DR DIP

Excellent

I love the moral here and the use of the perfectly animals to get your point across The grass isn't always greener. I love your little stories that have a moral Thanks for sharing

dip

 Comment Written 26-Dec-2017

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reply by the author on 27-Dec-2017

Thank YOU for reading, Mark. Have a lovely day.

Comment from royowen

Excellent

Coming from a background of untidiness, (me, not my siblings or parents) I can tell you I always felt a little uncomfortable in their presence, (but I still love them, heh heh). Well done, Maria, the grass may be greener, but a close look will probably see some untended weeds! Well done, great short work, blessings, Roy

 Comment Written 26-Dec-2017

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reply by the author on 27-Dec-2017

Thanks, Roy. Have a lovely day.

reply by royowen on 27-Dec-2017

You too Maria

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very cute submission you have penned for the Animal Cracker club. You used very cute descriptive wording and I love the art work you chose! Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 26-Dec-2017

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reply by the author on 27-Dec-2017

Thanks for reading, Teri.

Comment from damommy

Excellent

Hahaha. This is a great addition to the club. I never suspected who they were until the very last moment.

What a clever idea. 8-)

 Comment Written 26-Dec-2017

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reply by the author on 26-Dec-2017

Thanks for suggesting this event and for reading my little story, Yvonne.

reply by damommy on 26-Dec-2017

Thank you for being part of the club.

Comment from aryr

Excellent

This was so cute but also packed full of wisdom. It was very enjoyable and entertaining to read. I especially liked the last sentence where the true identities of George and Luke became known. Great job Maria, thanks.

 Comment Written 26-Dec-2017

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reply by the author on 26-Dec-2017

Thanks for reading, Aryr.

reply by aryr on 26-Dec-2017

You are very welcome, Maria.