Comment from judiverse

Excellent

What a clever ending for this. Imagine the cat and the pig exchanging homes. Cats are naturally pretty fastidious, so I doubt if they'd like the pig sty at all. Excellent presentation. A very effective presentation. Looks attractive on the page. Happy New Year to you. judi

 Comment Written 29-Dec-2017

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reply by the author on 30-Dec-2017

Thanks for reading. Happy New Year to you too.

reply by judiverse on 30-Dec-2017

Happy writing to you in the new year. judi

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

Maria, this is the way it is with many people. We want what others have or do not have and can become miserable if we were to change places. Blessings for a good new year, Patricia

 Comment Written 29-Dec-2017

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reply by the author on 29-Dec-2017

Thanks for reading and Happy New Year.

Comment from Cheryl I

Excellent

Haha! No, I wouldn't like to live in a pigsty either. This is a cute story, and the ending was quite unexpected. Nice job. Best wishes for a great 2018!

 Comment Written 28-Dec-2017

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reply by the author on 29-Dec-2017

Thanks for reading and Happy New Year to you too.

Comment from Ulla

Excellent

Hi Maria Jose, a great little story of what I first thought were two small boys swapping homes, and then I realised it was two cats. Wonderful morale in your little fairytale. Very good entry for the event. Happy New Year. All best. Ulla:)))

 Comment Written 28-Dec-2017

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reply by the author on 28-Dec-2017

Thanks for reading, Ulla. BTW. It's not two cats, it's a cat and a pig. ;)

reply by Ulla on 29-Dec-2017

Oh dear, I wrote it by mistake and didn't check. Sorry about that.

reply by the author on 29-Dec-2017

No worries. :)

Comment from pbomar1115

Excellent

I like the fable you have created. Some people have to learn what is it like living lower than what they are used to. It makes them appreciate what they are missing and sometimes strive to get back what they are used to as well.

Phillip

 Comment Written 28-Dec-2017

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reply by the author on 28-Dec-2017

Thanks for your review, Phillip.

reply by pbomar1115 on 28-Dec-2017

You're welcome, Maria.

Phillip

Comment from Gert sherwood

Excellent

Very clever Maria a pig and a cat
how the pig found the litter box was kept clean
and the cat ends up in a pig pen
Gert

 Comment Written 28-Dec-2017

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reply by the author on 28-Dec-2017

Thanks for reading, Gert.

Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

This is a cute flash fiction.
Well done, its not easy to tell such a complete story in so few words.
Well told,I like the artwork as well.
Thanks for sharing this.
Sharon

 Comment Written 27-Dec-2017

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reply by the author on 28-Dec-2017

I'm glad you liked it, Sharon.
Thanks for reading.

Comment from giraffmang

Excellent

Hi MJ,

Nice little piece here. the reveal is well-realised.

Strangely enough, pigs are actually very clean animals and the mud is a purification/cleansing ritual...lol

All the best
G

 Comment Written 27-Dec-2017

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reply by the author on 27-Dec-2017

Thanks for reading, Gareth. Have a great day.

Comment from Asem.inspirations

Excellent

Good morning, Maria: This story has a great moral to it. Always be happy with what you have and if you are not happy with what you have, do not take someone else's happy but make your own. (LOL)

George should have cleaned his own house and poor Luke now obviously wishes he never switched homes, not even for a minute. (lol)

This is a great short story and I love the ending. Have a great day!

 Comment Written 27-Dec-2017

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reply by the author on 27-Dec-2017

Thanks for reading, Tier. Have a lovely day yourself.

Comment from Ricky1024

Excellent

Spotless was well-written rich and seem as well as imagery in that flowed well read well we'll know grammar issues the contest both were firmly in place in excellent descriptive measures aligned perfectly thanks for this doctor Ricky 1024

 Comment Written 27-Dec-2017

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reply by the author on 27-Dec-2017

Thanks for reading.