Utopian Dream
Understanding is the key24 total reviews
Comment from D.F. Wood
Very good writing. Interesting to read; kept the reader's attention. I did notice one error (I believe). You wrote "These is no waste nor pollution in Utopia." I think this sentence should start with the word "There". Very good.
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2017
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Very good writing. Interesting to read; kept the reader's attention. I did notice one error (I believe). You wrote "These is no waste nor pollution in Utopia." I think this sentence should start with the word "There". Very good.
Comment Written 25-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2017
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Thank you very much. Will fix...John
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This essay about understanding has a key point of discussion for it is the key to appreciation of knowledge, imagination is more important but utopia or dream without false ideas is reality; I like. DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2017
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This essay about understanding has a key point of discussion for it is the key to appreciation of knowledge, imagination is more important but utopia or dream without false ideas is reality; I like. DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 25-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2017
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Thanks...John
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
After all, the only reason the ruling class has power is because we allow them to take ours.
Exactly. And WHY do we do it? If we could answer that question, maybe things might improve.
Good job explaining all the different isms.
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2017
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After all, the only reason the ruling class has power is because we allow them to take ours.
Exactly. And WHY do we do it? If we could answer that question, maybe things might improve.
Good job explaining all the different isms.
Comment Written 25-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2017
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Thank you very much...John
Comment from Ricky1024
humankind races to diverse adrift in her own little world I could care less about sexism to pet prejudism or any ISM if you want to list you total utopian societies many many hundreds of years away you mean that many hundreds and thousands of murders rapes and any other things that we can do to each other possibly Millions well written talk to Ricky 1024
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reply by the author on 25-Dec-2017
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humankind races to diverse adrift in her own little world I could care less about sexism to pet prejudism or any ISM if you want to list you total utopian societies many many hundreds of years away you mean that many hundreds and thousands of murders rapes and any other things that we can do to each other possibly Millions well written talk to Ricky 1024
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Comment Written 25-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2017
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This is only a chapter. It makes more sense when connected...Thanks
