Poetry NOOK
Viewing comments for Chapter 18 "Hey!!!"Eclectic style
6 total reviews
Comment from smileycloud
dear o dear
my old bladder will not handle this many giggles in one reading
you are such a cool writer
never never stop
blessings
Lorraine
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2017
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dear o dear
my old bladder will not handle this many giggles in one reading
you are such a cool writer
never never stop
blessings
Lorraine
Comment Written 25-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2017
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I can relate! I?m sorry, but glad to give you that effect with my post.
I shall find more! Thanks for your review, hugs, Trisha
Comment from Heather Knight
Poor little cat!
I like both your poem and the gif. They are both cute. With this one and the others you have written, you should create a children's book.
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2017
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Poor little cat!
I like both your poem and the gif. They are both cute. With this one and the others you have written, you should create a children's book.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 25-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2017
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Thanks for your confidence in my posts. I?ve seen some strange behaviors since I began to research!
Thanks for your complimentary review.
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Asem.inspirations
Oh my goodness, what a bully move but most dogs would think this is a fun or funny game to play. They perhaps don't know what it feels like to have their face pushed down into the snow. I wonder if anyone would be returning the favor to this dog but possibly not. Anyway, it is a cute video clip and a great poem. Have a great day!
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2017
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Oh my goodness, what a bully move but most dogs would think this is a fun or funny game to play. They perhaps don't know what it feels like to have their face pushed down into the snow. I wonder if anyone would be returning the favor to this dog but possibly not. Anyway, it is a cute video clip and a great poem. Have a great day!
Comment Written 25-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2017
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It?s a human type behavior, so I wonder. The animals also seem good at commando attacks! But I can?t resist these animated videos.
Hey!!!!!! Thanks for reviewing so kindly
Lots a hugs
Trisha
Comment from kiwigirl2821
Both of these adorable babies don't seem to mind the snow what so ever! A pretty write and it has imagination, beautiful thoughts and made me laugh. Well done. xoxo Kiwi
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2017
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Both of these adorable babies don't seem to mind the snow what so ever! A pretty write and it has imagination, beautiful thoughts and made me laugh. Well done. xoxo Kiwi
Comment Written 25-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2017
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Reader enjoyment is the best I can hope for for my posts. Thank you for reviewing
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is really funny and I so laughed and it brought me some fun today, especially as it is in the snow! I have just had a real soaking in Cadiz, never seen rain like it! I haven't been this wet in ages! Love Dolly x
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2017
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This is really funny and I so laughed and it brought me some fun today, especially as it is in the snow! I have just had a real soaking in Cadiz, never seen rain like it! I haven't been this wet in ages! Love Dolly x
Comment Written 25-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2017
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Uggg rain, like being in the UK. Thanks so much for reviewing, glad you enjoyed the video,, I laughed a lot as well.p
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Sallyo
The content is great fun, especially with the accompanying video. The rhyme is right, and the form is almost right, but the scansion seems off to me.
A tumpity, tumpity TUM
A tumpity, tumpity TUM
A tumpity TUM
A tumpity TUM
A tumpity, tumpity TUM
is the way I expect a limerick to scan. Mind you, maybe the definition has changed the way haiku did. (I'm informed the syllable count no longer has to be 5/7/5)
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2017
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The content is great fun, especially with the accompanying video. The rhyme is right, and the form is almost right, but the scansion seems off to me.
A tumpity, tumpity TUM
A tumpity, tumpity TUM
A tumpity TUM
A tumpity TUM
A tumpity, tumpity TUM
is the way I expect a limerick to scan. Mind you, maybe the definition has changed the way haiku did. (I'm informed the syllable count no longer has to be 5/7/5)
Comment Written 25-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2017
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Yup! I finally worked out what you meant , I?ll remember. Thanks for the idea. for next time. .i appreciated your review, and I?m glad you enjoyed the post for the most part.
