A Christmas Dichotomy
Sedoka9 total reviews
Comment from BeasPeas
This is a heart-wrenching poem and it prompts the reader to contemplate the disparity in circumstances in the world. It also prompts gratitude for the good things in our life that perhaps we take for granted. Much luck in the contest with this provocative write. Marilyn
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2017
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This is a heart-wrenching poem and it prompts the reader to contemplate the disparity in circumstances in the world. It also prompts gratitude for the good things in our life that perhaps we take for granted. Much luck in the contest with this provocative write. Marilyn
Comment Written 26-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2017
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Hi Marilyn. Thnakn you for your response and I think sometimeswe get caught up in our good fortune the less go without Just my way of acknowledging them Ypur luck is appreciated for this contest Cheers
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A sad write and at this time of year there are millions who are going hungry such is our unbalanced world, your poem highlights this fact, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2017
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A sad write and at this time of year there are millions who are going hungry such is our unbalanced world, your poem highlights this fact, love Dolly x
Comment Written 25-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2017
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Hi Dolly Th ald you for taking the time to review this Sedoka and as much as there is joy and fun ,For many it will be a lean sad time .However my best wishes to you Cheers.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Sedoka. If there is someone we know about who nay not have a meal for the day let us take to them a proper meal.
Merry Christmas to you and your family
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2017
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A very well-written Sedoka. If there is someone we know about who nay not have a meal for the day let us take to them a proper meal.
Merry Christmas to you and your family
Comment Written 24-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2017
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Hi Sandra, Yes we have a place for the less fortunate to go and have Xmas lunch so hopefully no one here will go hungry, It is Xmas day here today in Austrlia so my very best wishes to you and may you have a wonderful xmas too Cheers Christine
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This is a fine contrast of thoughts expressed, two dimensions well packed, starving children weep because festive fare is not for them and bellies remain empty; festive comes and goes; I like. DR ALCREATOR (6-STAR)
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2017
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This is a fine contrast of thoughts expressed, two dimensions well packed, starving children weep because festive fare is not for them and bellies remain empty; festive comes and goes; I like. DR ALCREATOR (6-STAR)
Comment Written 23-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2017
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Hi Alcreator Litt Dear, thanks you very much for you fabulous reviewcand six stars for my Sedoka I think it is important to not forget the less fortunate than us so I hope no child goes hungry today It is Xmas Day here in Australia so I wish you a very Merry Xmas and enjoy the celebrations Many Cheers to you and yours Christine
Comment from Sharon Haiste
This is a fine entry for the 'Sedoka Poem' writing prompt.
The artwork is excellent but the poem has a sad half.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2017
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This is a fine entry for the 'Sedoka Poem' writing prompt.
The artwork is excellent but the poem has a sad half.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 23-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2017
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Hi Sharon Thanks so much for you review and comments yes the image is a sad one but hopefully will get this message across. It is Xmas Day here in Australia so I send you a Very Merry Xmas and enjoy the celebrations Many Cheers Christine
Comment from mkflood
It's a good point. That is why I created it and I'm glad you took it further. I do thank you for selecting my work. It does work well with yours and it's an honor. Great job and thanks again.. MKFlood
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2017
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It's a good point. That is why I created it and I'm glad you took it further. I do thank you for selecting my work. It does work well with yours and it's an honor. Great job and thanks again.. MKFlood
Comment Written 23-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2017
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Hi mkflood, Thanks so much for your review and fo a lend of the image. I am pleased you approve of my use and as it is Xmas day here in Australia I send you a big Merry Xmas Cheers Christine
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i make available about 1000 drawings of a wide range of topics available to you writers here on fanstory. if you get the chance stop by YouTube.com and search "MKFlood Presents". there you will find many illustrated music videos of a wide range of stories and music. some will make you laugh, some will make you think, some will make you tap your foot and some will even make you cry. the admission is free but you have to bring your own snacks...mine taste flat..wink. thanks again..mkflood
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Hi Mkflood I will have a look at your tube and Thank you for supplying such great work for us writers to choose from I am sure I have used other images from you and I am a bit fussy so they must be good to get my vote.. Have a great Xmas Cheers Christine
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Thanks and Merry Christmas to you and your family as well.
Comment from zanya
Sadly yes this Sedoka leaves us in no doubt as to the down side of the Christmas festivities ....the reality of hunger on our planet....and a striking visual
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2017
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Sadly yes this Sedoka leaves us in no doubt as to the down side of the Christmas festivities ....the reality of hunger on our planet....and a striking visual
Comment Written 23-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2017
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Hi zanya. Thanks so much for your review and yes one must not forget the less fortunate and ai hope no child goes hungry today. As it is Xmas Day here in Australia I send a very Merry Xmas to you and yours Have a lovely celebration Cheers Christine
Comment from Lucian Carter
Hungry people suck. Even the poorest people in the western world tend to live better than a lot of people elsewhere. Thank you for reminding me. Will there ever be enough charity to go around?
Good Sedoka, I like the differing font sizes. That helped the message.
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2017
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Hungry people suck. Even the poorest people in the western world tend to live better than a lot of people elsewhere. Thank you for reminding me. Will there ever be enough charity to go around?
Good Sedoka, I like the differing font sizes. That helped the message.
Comment Written 23-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2017
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Thanks Lucian for your review and for your comments I tried to highlight the message using the different fonts to point out the big and small bellies Cheers Yes we are lucky in the Western world.
Comment from Ricky1024
This is a sudoka which was finally written rich and seem as well as imagery red well flowed well with no grammar issues at all the objective content met with object of content and both were excellent descriptive measures in place thanks for this doctor Ricky 1024 have a wonderful holiday
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2017
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This is a sudoka which was finally written rich and seem as well as imagery red well flowed well with no grammar issues at all the objective content met with object of content and both were excellent descriptive measures in place thanks for this doctor Ricky 1024 have a wonderful holiday
Comment Written 23-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2017
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Hi Doctor Ricky 1024 Thanks for you positive review and comments I am glad you thought it excellent your comments are much appreciated Cheers
