Pathway through the poplars
Short story6 total reviews
Comment from Ricky1024
This was well written rich and team as well as Andrea Floyd well read well with no grammar issues ejecting object contents were excellent and descriptive measures in place in the line perfectly thank for this doctor Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2018
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This was well written rich and team as well as Andrea Floyd well read well with no grammar issues ejecting object contents were excellent and descriptive measures in place in the line perfectly thank for this doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 25-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2018
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Thanks for taking time to read zanya
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This is a complete nice short story about appreciation of the love of a beautiful, caring woman, the value of humanity is well flown in a character so realistic; I like. DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2018
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This is a complete nice short story about appreciation of the love of a beautiful, caring woman, the value of humanity is well flown in a character so realistic; I like. DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 25-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2018
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Thanks for reading zanya
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written short story. When we are patient and willing to wait. The right person who we will bel best suited for will come to us and we will immediately know we found what we're looking for.
Merry Christmas to you and your family
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2018
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A very well-written short story. When we are patient and willing to wait. The right person who we will bel best suited for will come to us and we will immediately know we found what we're looking for.
Merry Christmas to you and your family
Comment Written 24-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2018
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Thanks for reading zanya
Comment from RodG
I confess I do enjoy going back in time to meet these aristocratic personages. The characters are all Victorian types we've met before in such romances: the aging aristocratic bachelor, the loyal valet, and the lovely recently widowed but very much pregnant lady. What makes this story appealing to me, however, is the DICTION & DETAILS used to put us there. The plot is predictable, but who cares. Delightful.
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2018
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I confess I do enjoy going back in time to meet these aristocratic personages. The characters are all Victorian types we've met before in such romances: the aging aristocratic bachelor, the loyal valet, and the lovely recently widowed but very much pregnant lady. What makes this story appealing to me, however, is the DICTION & DETAILS used to put us there. The plot is predictable, but who cares. Delightful.
Comment Written 24-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2018
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This review is very much appreciated zanya
Comment from Sharon Haiste
This is a good poem for the Found It writing prompt.
The lovely picture is a good match as well.
Good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2018
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This is a good poem for the Found It writing prompt.
The lovely picture is a good match as well.
Good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 22-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2018
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Not a poem !! Thanks for reading zanya
Comment from Paul Bownas
Though well written, I think that it was a little too pointed, and also that it seemed to rush the story to it's obvious end. Perhaps if there had been a little more build up it might have given the reader a little more anticipation, and that might have made it more enjoyable. The setting though, was well done and I could imagine these worthy gentlemen in their finery, in the lounge with their glasses of port. The makings of the story is definitely there, it perhaps just needs to be spread out a little?
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2018
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Though well written, I think that it was a little too pointed, and also that it seemed to rush the story to it's obvious end. Perhaps if there had been a little more build up it might have given the reader a little more anticipation, and that might have made it more enjoyable. The setting though, was well done and I could imagine these worthy gentlemen in their finery, in the lounge with their glasses of port. The makings of the story is definitely there, it perhaps just needs to be spread out a little?
Comment Written 22-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2018
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Thanks for taking time to read and write an interesting review zanya
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My pleasure.
