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Comment from Asem.inspirations
Good moring again, Ricky: WOW! What an interesting and wrll written piece. I feel so horrible for Barry, his father and you. Is this a true story because you posted it under horror and thriller not non-fiction. If it is tru my heart realy goes out to you and his family. What a horrific tragedy, so horrible.
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2017
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Good moring again, Ricky: WOW! What an interesting and wrll written piece. I feel so horrible for Barry, his father and you. Is this a true story because you posted it under horror and thriller not non-fiction. If it is tru my heart realy goes out to you and his family. What a horrific tragedy, so horrible.
Comment Written 24-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2017
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True but I was fortunate, to only hear and not witness this.
Over fifty years and tears...
Ago...
Ricky...
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
God Ricky you sure have suffered in your life. I feel for you deeply. Paedophiles are sadly so common that they say Great Britain cannot imprison them all. It is terrible as I suffered that way myself. I feel your pain deeply. Much love and warmest regards and well done Meia x
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2017
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God Ricky you sure have suffered in your life. I feel for you deeply. Paedophiles are sadly so common that they say Great Britain cannot imprison them all. It is terrible as I suffered that way myself. I feel your pain deeply. Much love and warmest regards and well done Meia x
Comment Written 18-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2017
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R hanks M eia.
Did I ever tell you about another friend?
Her name was Jan Jan was my kindergarten Crush I will walk to her house every day of school and then we would walk to school was not far I would hold her hands after school at we could go into the field now to pick flowers and we would try the nephew to feel butterflies one day Jan didn't answer the door to go to school in this had continued for about a week's worth of school my kindergarten teacher found out that Jan had died of a brain aneurysm she was only going on 6 years old also talking about another friend I can't remember his name it's been so long who was on the way to a funeral of one of his relatives it was hit by a train the car was Pulled Under the same thing happened to him both incidents within a week at the same crossing the warning gate was down they just tried to Beat It thanks dr. Ricky 1024
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This is an example of exactly why guns should never just sit around in a loaded state. It's easy to say 'Be Careful' but the truth is a loaded gun is always a lethal accident waiting to happen. Nicely done and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2017
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This is an example of exactly why guns should never just sit around in a loaded state. It's easy to say 'Be Careful' but the truth is a loaded gun is always a lethal accident waiting to happen. Nicely done and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 18-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2017
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Shocked the hell out of me when i read it on a "Face Book Site.'
Ricky....
Comment from tara-jade
great work, keep it up and continue to write the book mate. I think it will turn out great once it is done. i found it hard to stay on focus of it as there needs to be more to read.
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2017
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great work, keep it up and continue to write the book mate. I think it will turn out great once it is done. i found it hard to stay on focus of it as there needs to be more to read.
Comment Written 18-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2017
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Perhaps you caught it before it was meant to be released?
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A chilling write about child abuse and the lasting effects of it and the terrible experiences that some children suffer their entire lives, very sad and poignant write, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2017
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A chilling write about child abuse and the lasting effects of it and the terrible experiences that some children suffer their entire lives, very sad and poignant write, love Dolly x
Comment Written 18-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2017
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Thanks Dolly for this fine review.
Dr. Ricky 1024.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This is a fine and fantastic poem about the incident and death of a friend named Barry died in a formidable accident; I liked; it was an easy read. DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2017
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This is a fine and fantastic poem about the incident and death of a friend named Barry died in a formidable accident; I liked; it was an easy read. DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 17-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2017
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Thanks Alcreator for your time and review.
Dr. Ricky...
Comment from kathleenspalding
Whew! Strong poem tells a tragic story. So sorry about your friend. When they were kids, one of my husband's friends had the same thing happen - blew his leg off, but he lived. Every NRA magazine should list the people who've died accidentally from guns each month!
Only a couple typos -
no apostrophe in My Last Days on Earth
My (Twelfth) Birthday
Cuts (an) Ace of Spades
All the best,
Kathy
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2017
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Whew! Strong poem tells a tragic story. So sorry about your friend. When they were kids, one of my husband's friends had the same thing happen - blew his leg off, but he lived. Every NRA magazine should list the people who've died accidentally from guns each month!
Only a couple typos -
no apostrophe in My Last Days on Earth
My (Twelfth) Birthday
Cuts (an) Ace of Spades
All the best,
Kathy
Comment Written 17-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2017
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Thanks Kathleen.
A two year old...
{Female}a Mother Christmas Shopping...
{Walmart}
A loaded Gun...
{Stupidity}
A Pocket boon with the gun...
A dead mother?
Why?
She and her daughter...
Will never no?
Dr. Ricky and thanks.
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You're welcome.
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
OH wow and it happens all the time, to the good ones that need to keep going and the others that will be empty when gone. Very good
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2017
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OH wow and it happens all the time, to the good ones that need to keep going and the others that will be empty when gone. Very good
Comment Written 17-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2017
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A Two year old...
{Daughter} A mother Christmas shopping .
{Walmart} A loaded revolver in her pocketbook.
{A Dead Mother?}
The Two year old and mother will never know?
Kid shoots dumb mother?
See Page number Idiot!
Now, NRA. Shove that up your pistols?
Ricky...
