Baby Billy
A toddler toy6 total reviews
Comment from Dean Kuch
Well, Anonymous Poet. No one can try and accuse you of not following the rules in this contest.
You've certainly penned a Tyburn here in the proper syllabic count, as specified by the Tyburn form.
Good luck with it.
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2017
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Well, Anonymous Poet. No one can try and accuse you of not following the rules in this contest.
You've certainly penned a Tyburn here in the proper syllabic count, as specified by the Tyburn form.
Good luck with it.
Comment Written 18-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2017
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Thank you for the good review.
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My pleasure.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a fun write and great play on matching rhyming words which flowed really well and it is difficult to do in this form, a great write that made me smile, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2017
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This is a fun write and great play on matching rhyming words which flowed really well and it is difficult to do in this form, a great write that made me smile, love Dolly x
Comment Written 18-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2017
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Thank you so much.
Comment from Lucian Carter
How do people keep making these Tyburn poems work so well?
This is particularly apt because the repetitive rhyming style of the Tyburn works great to capture children's literature's style.
Perfect flow and rhymes. But most of all, genuinely fun! Great work.
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2017
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How do people keep making these Tyburn poems work so well?
This is particularly apt because the repetitive rhyming style of the Tyburn works great to capture children's literature's style.
Perfect flow and rhymes. But most of all, genuinely fun! Great work.
Comment Written 17-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2017
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Thank you for the good review.
Comment from Cheryl I
I like your poem, but you did not follow the 5th-8th syllable part of the prompt. I gave you 5 stars for the content and rhyming, and because I think you did a good job except for that one part of the prompt. You're not the only one having this confusion, believe me. All the best - Cheryl
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2017
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I like your poem, but you did not follow the 5th-8th syllable part of the prompt. I gave you 5 stars for the content and rhyming, and because I think you did a good job except for that one part of the prompt. You're not the only one having this confusion, believe me. All the best - Cheryl
Comment Written 17-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2017
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Thank you for the comments. I edited the poem and followed the rules this time. I appreciate your help.
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Very well done. All the best - Cheryl
Comment from Poetic Friend
This is so cute. I love Silly Billy. He makes for interesting poetry. I hope he gets his bouncy toy.
Good luck in the contest. This is a fun write with great potential for winning. Good luck.
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2017
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This is so cute. I love Silly Billy. He makes for interesting poetry. I hope he gets his bouncy toy.
Good luck in the contest. This is a fun write with great potential for winning. Good luck.
Comment Written 17-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2017
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Thank you for your comments.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
This is a good attempt at a Tyburn poem but the last two lines have restrictions on them.
'The last two lines rhyme and incorporate the first, second, third, and fourth lines as the (5th through 8th) syllables.'
I missed this on my first attempt as well.
Sharon
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2017
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This is a good attempt at a Tyburn poem but the last two lines have restrictions on them.
'The last two lines rhyme and incorporate the first, second, third, and fourth lines as the (5th through 8th) syllables.'
I missed this on my first attempt as well.
Sharon
Comment Written 17-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2017
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Thank you. I edited it and corrected the mistakes. I appreciate you telling me it was incorrect.
