My Number Wasn't Up
A Day's Work in Viet Nam15 total reviews
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written story. We do not really know when our time will come. When we are in a dangerous situation and we survive it is a definite sign that it was not our time.
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2017
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A very well-written story. We do not really know when our time will come. When we are in a dangerous situation and we survive it is a definite sign that it was not our time.
Comment Written 16-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2017
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Thank you so much for your review. I really appreciate it.
Comment from Thomas Bowling
This is very good, Bill. Your style is very good and unmistakable. This should do very well in the contest. I've read the others. This in the running. Good luck.
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2017
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This is very good, Bill. Your style is very good and unmistakable. This should do very well in the contest. I've read the others. This in the running. Good luck.
Comment Written 15-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2017
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Thank you for your review and good words. I appreciate it.
Comment from Thesis
The surrealism of it all, perfectly describes how it was. Quick action, rapid fire, alarms going off, choppers killed in air plunging toward earth, does not prepare the soldier for the crash and need to jump out firing, just to stay alive. Climbing back in for the M-60 was probably the only thing that saved part of that crew. FUBAR, is the best way to describe the situation.
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2017
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The surrealism of it all, perfectly describes how it was. Quick action, rapid fire, alarms going off, choppers killed in air plunging toward earth, does not prepare the soldier for the crash and need to jump out firing, just to stay alive. Climbing back in for the M-60 was probably the only thing that saved part of that crew. FUBAR, is the best way to describe the situation.
Comment Written 15-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2017
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Thank you very much for your review and critique. I truly appreciate it. Yes, FUBAR
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This story is clearly depicted, violence and accident took place and went on, but fortunately the author saved his life after hospitalization, a war front scene is nicely captured; I liked. DR ALCREATOR
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reply by the author on 15-Dec-2017
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This story is clearly depicted, violence and accident took place and went on, but fortunately the author saved his life after hospitalization, a war front scene is nicely captured; I liked. DR ALCREATOR
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Comment Written 15-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2017
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Thank you very much for your review. I truly appreciate it.
Comment from Ben Colder
Many war stories and many never to be told. Been there, done that and none is meant to be remembered. Sad times for America. We lost so many.
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reply by the author on 15-Dec-2017
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Many war stories and many never to be told. Been there, done that and none is meant to be remembered. Sad times for America. We lost so many.
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Comment Written 15-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2017
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Thank you for your review Ben. I really appreciate it. God Bless You.
