Freedom's Formula
Antonym Poem11 total reviews
Comment from Joan E.
I admired your masterful presentation, with its dramatically appealing colors and typeface embedded in the artwork. Your title, selection of completely opposite words and your message are very compelling. Best wishes in the contest- Joan
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I admired your masterful presentation, with its dramatically appealing colors and typeface embedded in the artwork. Your title, selection of completely opposite words and your message are very compelling. Best wishes in the contest- Joan
Comment Written 12-Jan-2018
Comment from mvbrooks
Congratulations on your recognition in this contest. For such a short poem, it's amazingly challenging to smoothly move from one antonym in just two lines. Well done.
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Congratulations on your recognition in this contest. For such a short poem, it's amazingly challenging to smoothly move from one antonym in just two lines. Well done.
Comment Written 10-Jan-2018
Comment from Joy Graham
Wow, this is a striking presentation and message. I love your antonym words of corruption and integrity. You say it with authority here, and I believe you. Congratulations on your second place showing in the contest. Well deserved.
Joy xx
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Wow, this is a striking presentation and message. I love your antonym words of corruption and integrity. You say it with authority here, and I believe you. Congratulations on your second place showing in the contest. Well deserved.
Joy xx
Comment Written 10-Jan-2018
Comment from nordicgirl
I think this is one of your best, Michael. It's perfect really. The truth of this is striking I believe and you have stated it in a way I will always remember. Is this a contest of some kind? You should win. NG
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I think this is one of your best, Michael. It's perfect really. The truth of this is striking I believe and you have stated it in a way I will always remember. Is this a contest of some kind? You should win. NG
Comment Written 20-Dec-2017
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice image.
-I like your choice of antonyms.
-The message is an appropriate
one with all that is going on.
-The choice of "integrity" is
an excellent way to make things better.
-Good luck in the contest.
-One small thing: "it's" should be [its].
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-Very nice image.
-I like your choice of antonyms.
-The message is an appropriate
one with all that is going on.
-The choice of "integrity" is
an excellent way to make things better.
-Good luck in the contest.
-One small thing: "it's" should be [its].
Comment Written 20-Dec-2017
Comment from Lucian Carter
Good on all fronts. A strongly expressed message (I agree with) while using an interesting, and well-chosen, set of antonyms. Integrity may not help you against a guy with a pointy stick, but it's important nonetheless.
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Good on all fronts. A strongly expressed message (I agree with) while using an interesting, and well-chosen, set of antonyms. Integrity may not help you against a guy with a pointy stick, but it's important nonetheless.
Comment Written 20-Dec-2017
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written antonym poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery with the art work. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
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This is a very well written antonym poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery with the art work. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 20-Dec-2017
Comment from Sharon Haiste
This is a good and interesting entry for the 'Antonym' writing prompt.
Well said with a good message.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
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This is a good and interesting entry for the 'Antonym' writing prompt.
Well said with a good message.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 20-Dec-2017
Comment from giraffmang
Hi Michael,
A very good entry for the competition here. Sadly it seems as if integrity is in short supply these days.
in all it's forms - should be its.
All the best
G
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Hi Michael,
A very good entry for the competition here. Sadly it seems as if integrity is in short supply these days.
in all it's forms - should be its.
All the best
G
Comment Written 20-Dec-2017
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Antonym poem. It seems corruption is ruling the whole world. Nothing seems to be Holy to anyone anymore not even their souls are important. Only integrity can win corruption
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reply by the author on 20-Dec-2017
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A very well-written Antonym poem. It seems corruption is ruling the whole world. Nothing seems to be Holy to anyone anymore not even their souls are important. Only integrity can win corruption
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Comment Written 20-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2017
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Well said, Sandra. Thanks so much. Mike
