Holiday, Holiday
Song lyrics60 total reviews
Comment from Boogienights
This song is lovely, and it has a great message. No matter what your beliefs are or how you celebrate a holiday, we can and should put aside our differences and be happy together in the moment. I'd love to hear this put to music, it's a great contest entry. Good luck to you.
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This song is lovely, and it has a great message. No matter what your beliefs are or how you celebrate a holiday, we can and should put aside our differences and be happy together in the moment. I'd love to hear this put to music, it's a great contest entry. Good luck to you.
Comment Written 29-Dec-2017
Comment from Ricky1024
This is a lyrics makes the song contest entry prompt well-written rich and seems Wells imagery flowed well read well and have no grammar issues so to speak ejecting object the contents were excellent and descriptive measures were firmly in place thanks for this doctor Ricky 1024 and then good luck
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This is a lyrics makes the song contest entry prompt well-written rich and seems Wells imagery flowed well read well and have no grammar issues so to speak ejecting object the contents were excellent and descriptive measures were firmly in place thanks for this doctor Ricky 1024 and then good luck
Comment Written 29-Dec-2017
Comment from MelB
What beautiful lyrics to this song. Very nice description and imagery, making this time of year almost magical. I think the politically correct movement will lose its grip. Just another thing designed to take us away from God.
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What beautiful lyrics to this song. Very nice description and imagery, making this time of year almost magical. I think the politically correct movement will lose its grip. Just another thing designed to take us away from God.
Comment Written 29-Dec-2017
Comment from Mistydawn
I never viewed the use of Merry Chrismas from that pov, but I suppose it would seem that way. Your poem is well-written it has a nice whimsical flow, great beginning of a cheerful song, nice job.
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I never viewed the use of Merry Chrismas from that pov, but I suppose it would seem that way. Your poem is well-written it has a nice whimsical flow, great beginning of a cheerful song, nice job.
Comment Written 29-Dec-2017
Comment from MSJVClarke
This is an upbeat and positive lyrical poem. I thought you portrayed the holiday well for "ALL" with no bias and certainly your words have musical quality. I agree with your philosophy, Christianity should never be used to taunt.
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This is an upbeat and positive lyrical poem. I thought you portrayed the holiday well for "ALL" with no bias and certainly your words have musical quality. I agree with your philosophy, Christianity should never be used to taunt.
Comment Written 29-Dec-2017
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
Very well-written song lyrics. We can all have a holiday without trying to down size some others who don't believe the same as we do. The purpose of Christmas is to bring us all together..
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Very well-written song lyrics. We can all have a holiday without trying to down size some others who don't believe the same as we do. The purpose of Christmas is to bring us all together..
Comment Written 29-Dec-2017
Comment from c_lucas
The Holiday Season is just about over with. New Years is the last holiday for this season. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read. Good luck in your contest.
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The Holiday Season is just about over with. New Years is the last holiday for this season. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read. Good luck in your contest.
Comment Written 29-Dec-2017
Comment from apky
This had the best lyyrics, meaningful, wise, emotional that I ever read.
I'm completely hopeless at the "craft" of poetry and writing lyrics, so I
won't be able to help you with that in any meaningful way except that
I loved your piece when I read it. Especially:
you sing my song
and I'll sing yours too
holiday, holiday
peace unto you
holiday, holiday
love shining thru
You have all my best wishes for the contest.
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This had the best lyyrics, meaningful, wise, emotional that I ever read.
I'm completely hopeless at the "craft" of poetry and writing lyrics, so I
won't be able to help you with that in any meaningful way except that
I loved your piece when I read it. Especially:
you sing my song
and I'll sing yours too
holiday, holiday
peace unto you
holiday, holiday
love shining thru
You have all my best wishes for the contest.
Comment Written 29-Dec-2017
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
An uplifting song about the holidays when we all celebrate and have a break from our normal routine, these periods always renew us so that we can carry on, Happy New year to you and good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
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An uplifting song about the holidays when we all celebrate and have a break from our normal routine, these periods always renew us so that we can carry on, Happy New year to you and good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 29-Dec-2017
Comment from nordicgirl
This is truly exceptional, Michael. I love the message of this. You are on the Mark, but you ain't preachy about it. I can already hear this being sung. Beautiful in every way. I do hope you are going to finish this with music and all. Wow, choir and orchestra, YEAH! NG
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This is truly exceptional, Michael. I love the message of this. You are on the Mark, but you ain't preachy about it. I can already hear this being sung. Beautiful in every way. I do hope you are going to finish this with music and all. Wow, choir and orchestra, YEAH! NG
Comment Written 29-Dec-2017
