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My Book of Poems 2010-2017

Viewing comments for Chapter 65 "At this time of year"
a collection of my poetry

38 total reviews 
Comment from MelB
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Love the mug! It's fun to watch Christmas movies. I've been watching some of those cheesy ones on Hallmark. I know what Baikeys is, but I'm going to have to look up Disaronno.

 Comment Written 04-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 04-Dec-2017
    Hi, Mel;
    Disaronno is an Italian liqueur. I was exposed to it at an early age, and it is a special treat at this time of year.

    Thank you for reading and reviewing,

    ~patty~
Comment from krys123
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Cheers, Patty;
-and nothing could be absolutely sweeter than having your puppy snoring next you softly what you watching a good Christmas classic
to see if the angel gets its wings.
-This had its own internal rhythm a tempo that only the enjambment achieved and which close smoothly throughout the writing without any hiccups a syntactical breaks in the meaning and understanding of your poem.
-Thanks for a lovely thought that is truly purely precious and so holiday heartwarming.
-Take care and have a good one especially with all those that you can love dearly.
Alex

 Comment Written 04-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 04-Dec-2017
    Hi, Alex;
    THANK YOU so much for the lovely rating and kind words about this poem. I had such a wonderful day. Tomorrow will be hectic and then I get to pack the house in between traveling to VA for the Christmas holiday and finish our move next month.

    Shew! It makes me tired just to write about it --- but at least, I had today,

    ~patty~
reply by krys123 on 15-Dec-2017
    Well I hope everything turns out in all your endeavors are blessed ones. May you have the happiest of holidays and especially may your Christmas blessings follow you throughout the years to come.
    Alex
    Alex
Comment from wordsmithbully
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Oh yes! Good stuff here! Gotta love it! Christmas is so great and especially hot coffee! I'm a coffee addict! Great write! Happy holidays and enjoy!!!

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 Comment Written 04-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 04-Dec-2017
    Thank you so much

    ~patty~
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
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There is a time to work and decorate and wrap and plan and cook...but there is also the time to sit back and just ... breathe. Nicely thought

 Comment Written 04-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 04-Dec-2017
    Hi, Barb;
    Thank you so much for the nice review. I am really enjoying this day -- so many things to do - but they can all wait until tomorrow!

    ~patty~
Comment from lyenochka
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It's great that you can be so relaxed while you are drinking coffee. I'd be on the ceiling if I have the smallest amount of caffeine. Wait, shouldn't you be packing? Enjoy those pleasant moments!

 Comment Written 04-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 04-Dec-2017
    hi there;

    not quite in packing mode; I start packing in earnest next week. I'm just itching to decorate the new place!

    My hubby wants to paint the interior walls to match our stuff, and there's a room that needs new carpeting installed, so we won't officially move until the third week of January. (I have to give 30 days notice here - and it looks like the closing will happen right after the New Year.)

    I hope you have a great week.
    ~patty~
Comment from Joan E.
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Thank you for sharing your Christmas message with us in this free verse and potent picture. I am glad you are taking it easy at a time that can be a bit frantic. Enjoy your puppies and your brew- Joan

 Comment Written 04-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 04-Dec-2017
    Hi, Joan;
    Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. Today has been just lovely!

    ~patty~
reply by Joan E. on 04-Dec-2017
    I hope it is followed by many more peaceful days. Smiles- Joan
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
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My puppies snore softly at my side
And I take another sip of my Christmas brew
At this time of the year,
There's Baileys in my coffee
And a smile in my heart'
What a sweet image it sounds so lovely thanks for sharing it with us I hope you have a great Christmas with the pups and warm drinks and a warm fire :) love Meia xx

 Comment Written 04-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 04-Dec-2017
    Hi, Meia;
    Thank you so much for the great review. I'm having a wonderful day,

    ~patty~
Comment from Sasha
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I had to look up Disaronno to figure out what it was. I have never heard of it but it sounds good. Personally, I like Baileys in my coffee. Very relaxing poem, just my kind of day.

 Comment Written 04-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 04-Dec-2017
    Hi, Sasha;
    I love Baileys, but Disarono is a favorite, too. Since it is an Italian liqueur, my great-grandparents would toast at holidays - and even little old me (about 3) got a taste.

    Today, I get to have it in two shots, over ice!

    ~patty~
Comment from Leineco
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:-)

Allergic to coffee, I have become a fiend for hot chocolate, come
the Christmas season. . .I thought I had found nirvana when I
discovered Land O' Lakes Raspberry Blend. . .and THEN I met
met Disaranno. . . . . . . .

Christmas has never been so merry! ;-)

Your poem brought a smile to my face!


 Comment Written 04-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 04-Dec-2017
    Hi there;
    I'm glad I gave you a smile! Thank you for reading my work, and I hope you have a joyous season.

    ~patty~
Comment from GSmuse
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These phrases make me feel relaxed and ready to join in the same type of activity. There are so many wonderful Christmas Stories made into movies, both old, in Turner Classics and modern comedies about the holidays. The comfort of dogs along side you is one I can visualize. Right now, I have no dog or dogs but soon I hope to adopt one. The turn of phrase "a smile in my heart" is lovely.
GSmuse Gwendolyn

 Comment Written 04-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 04-Dec-2017
    Hi, Gwendolyn;
    Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I'm happy my little poem made you feel relaxed,

    ~patty~