My Book of Poems 2010-2017
Viewing comments for Chapter 66 "A Poinsettia for You"a collection of my poetry
34 total reviews
Comment from TAB_that's me
I love the poinsettia. Which reminds me, I haven't bought one yet this year. Time to get out and get one.
It sounds like you have been friends of there's for a long time.
teresa
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2017
I love the poinsettia. Which reminds me, I haven't bought one yet this year. Time to get out and get one.
It sounds like you have been friends of there's for a long time.
teresa
Comment Written 02-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2017
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Hi there;
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing this poem about the love between a husband and wife, and the grief that comes when one of them passes,
~patty~
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Oh my! I am sorry for their loss and yours. I did enjoy reading this poem. You did a wonderful job writing it and the emotion shown through. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2017
Oh my! I am sorry for their loss and yours. I did enjoy reading this poem. You did a wonderful job writing it and the emotion shown through. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2017
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Hi there;
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing this poem about the love between a husband and wife, and the grief that comes when one of them passes,
~patty~
Comment from royowen
I must admit I'd never heard of a poinsettia until now Patty. A beautifully scribed poem Patty, Is this for a friend, I often write for those that don't. I have written a few in the last couple of years. Well done, beautifully written in your own distinct articulate style my friend, blessings, Roy blessings,
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2017
I must admit I'd never heard of a poinsettia until now Patty. A beautifully scribed poem Patty, Is this for a friend, I often write for those that don't. I have written a few in the last couple of years. Well done, beautifully written in your own distinct articulate style my friend, blessings, Roy blessings,
Comment Written 02-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2017
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Hi there;
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing this poem about the love between a husband and wife, and the grief that comes when one of them passes,
~patty~
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Well done
Comment from Mimi Linny
A beautiful poem that brings the lovely poinsettia a story of love from beginning to last breath of romance! Not quite rhyming, but more free-versed; the ending though sad, brings the charm of poinsettia to a full circle of life. Nicely done!
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2017
A beautiful poem that brings the lovely poinsettia a story of love from beginning to last breath of romance! Not quite rhyming, but more free-versed; the ending though sad, brings the charm of poinsettia to a full circle of life. Nicely done!
Comment Written 02-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2017
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Hi there;
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing this poem about the love between a husband and wife, and the grief that comes when one of them passes,
~patty~
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I adore these plants and I am surrounded by them just now, delightful to look at and easy to take care of. Your poem is heartfelt and warm with wonderful memories and a great tribute to your friend, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2017
I adore these plants and I am surrounded by them just now, delightful to look at and easy to take care of. Your poem is heartfelt and warm with wonderful memories and a great tribute to your friend, love Dolly x
Comment Written 02-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2017
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Hi there;
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing this poem about the love between a husband and wife, and the grief that comes when one of them passes,
~patty~
Comment from Sharon Haiste
This starts out as a lovely 'Love' poem and then ends as a sad 'Love' poem.
Well done.
This tells a clear story. The emotions can be strongly felt.
Well done.
Sharon
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2017
This starts out as a lovely 'Love' poem and then ends as a sad 'Love' poem.
Well done.
This tells a clear story. The emotions can be strongly felt.
Well done.
Sharon
Comment Written 02-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2017
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Hi there;
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing this poem about the love between a husband and wife, and the grief that comes when one of them passes,
~patty~
Comment from jenintorre
O.M.G. I wasn't expecting an ending like that. I was being carried merrily along with your happy little poem then Boom!
I am so glad it's not true. Well done.
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2017
O.M.G. I wasn't expecting an ending like that. I was being carried merrily along with your happy little poem then Boom!
I am so glad it's not true. Well done.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2017
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Hi there;
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing this poem about the love between a husband and wife, and the grief that comes when one of them passes,
~patty~
(it is true; I will be attending her Memorial service later this afternoon.)
Comment from Liberty Justice
Such a happy, but sorrowful poem. I felt the life story from first date to marriage, and this was so fascinating about the red flowers. So sad was the ending when wife passed away. Sent chills down my spines. truly liberty justice
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2017
Such a happy, but sorrowful poem. I felt the life story from first date to marriage, and this was so fascinating about the red flowers. So sad was the ending when wife passed away. Sent chills down my spines. truly liberty justice
Comment Written 02-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2017
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Hi there;
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing this poem about the love between a husband and wife, and the grief that comes when one of them passes,
~patty~
Comment from Dean Kuch
Oh, my...
I have to admit, I didn't see that ending coming from a mile away, Patty.
So sad...in a way.
It's sad because the husband narrating the poem lost his beloved wife.
Although in another sense, it evokes a feeling of peaceful serenity knowing he loved her this much.
Do you get where I'm coming from?
Excellent...
~Dean
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2017
Oh, my...
I have to admit, I didn't see that ending coming from a mile away, Patty.
So sad...in a way.
It's sad because the husband narrating the poem lost his beloved wife.
Although in another sense, it evokes a feeling of peaceful serenity knowing he loved her this much.
Do you get where I'm coming from?
Excellent...
~Dean
Comment Written 02-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2017
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Hi, Dean;
this is based on truth. Later today, I will be attending the memorial service for a dear friend.
I do get where you're coming from; I think enjoying a love so deep is one of the best things in life,
~patty~
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
That was both sad and lovely, Patty, and very nicely written. Your friend had a happy and loving relationship with his wife, and I know he will miss her dreadfully. I enjoyed this, my friend, but was so sad at the end. Big hugs. :) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2017
That was both sad and lovely, Patty, and very nicely written. Your friend had a happy and loving relationship with his wife, and I know he will miss her dreadfully. I enjoyed this, my friend, but was so sad at the end. Big hugs. :) Sandra xx
Comment Written 02-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2017
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Hi there;
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing this poem about the love between a husband and wife, and the grief that comes when one of them passes,
~patty~