Autum
A poem of change19 total reviews
Comment from Teri7
This is a very beautiful free style poem you have penned about the autumn of your life. It seems to be that way at times in our life. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2017
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This is a very beautiful free style poem you have penned about the autumn of your life. It seems to be that way at times in our life. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 01-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2017
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Thank you so much Teri. Every review always touches me :)
Missy
Comment from BeasPeas
This is a very good poem. The intense passion of love changes with the seasons of love. It doesn't mean there is no love, but rather that it calms down and it becomes more mellow. Nicely composed. Marilyn
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2017
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This is a very good poem. The intense passion of love changes with the seasons of love. It doesn't mean there is no love, but rather that it calms down and it becomes more mellow. Nicely composed. Marilyn
Comment Written 01-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2017
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Hi Marilyn, it?s been awhile but I?m delighted to see your name here in my reviews!
Thank you:)
Missy
Comment from patcelaw
It would never be a good thing to find out your lover for many years is wanting a new love. I found in my 37 year marriage that no matter how hard the times were for us, with illnesses we came out strong in our love. Patricia
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2017
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It would never be a good thing to find out your lover for many years is wanting a new love. I found in my 37 year marriage that no matter how hard the times were for us, with illnesses we came out strong in our love. Patricia
Comment Written 01-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2017
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Hi lady:)
Thank you for using some of your valuable time to leave this awesome R&R.
Missy
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
You deliver a beautiful synopsis of love's seasons. Your word choices inspire both visual and visceral responses in the reader. Nicely done and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2017
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You deliver a beautiful synopsis of love's seasons. Your word choices inspire both visual and visceral responses in the reader. Nicely done and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 01-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2017
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Hi sweet Angel, I?m so happy to be back.
Thanks for always being one of the first to to always read and review my work:)
Missy
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
The autumn of love can mean it is maturing or it could mean it is coming to a close, but a new beginning starts in both cases, best wishes, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2017
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The autumn of love can mean it is maturing or it could mean it is coming to a close, but a new beginning starts in both cases, best wishes, love Dolly x
Comment Written 01-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2017
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Dolly, thank you for leaving me a wonderful R&R!
I look forward to reading something of yours:)
Missy
Comment from Bill O'Bier
Nobody can predict the future. In relationships, we have to keep lines of communication open and care for our significant other through good times and bad. Thanks for a thought provoking poem.
Bill~
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2017
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Nobody can predict the future. In relationships, we have to keep lines of communication open and care for our significant other through good times and bad. Thanks for a thought provoking poem.
Bill~
Comment Written 01-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2017
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Hi there Bill! I?m so grateful to see your name here. Thank you for leaving me a wonderful review!
Missy
Comment from royowen
An excellent work. I liked the analogy of the changing seasons. The spring of life and the zestful adventures of love's life, then the mellowing and the colour change to autumnal, orange to grey, the graduation of love's adventure culminating in...doubt? Well done, written in articulate verse, and slightly changing rhyme, inbuilt to give it affect, wel done, blessings, Roy
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reply by the author on 02-Dec-2017
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An excellent work. I liked the analogy of the changing seasons. The spring of life and the zestful adventures of love's life, then the mellowing and the colour change to autumnal, orange to grey, the graduation of love's adventure culminating in...doubt? Well done, written in articulate verse, and slightly changing rhyme, inbuilt to give it affect, wel done, blessings, Roy
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Comment Written 01-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2017
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Hello old friend:)
Thank you for stopping by and leaving me such a wonderful R&R!
Missy
Comment from Heather Knight
I've really enjoyed reading your poem, the way it describes the changing nature of love... But what I loved the most was the surprising ending.
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2017
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I've really enjoyed reading your poem, the way it describes the changing nature of love... But what I loved the most was the surprising ending.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 01-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2017
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I feel enormously blessed to have returned to FanStory and received this lovely review, Maria. Thank you so very much.
Missy
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written love poem that seems to last through all the seasons, but in the season of Autumn we start to doubt ourselves if we are strong enough to go through the two last seasons.
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reply by the author on 01-Dec-2017
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A very well-written love poem that seems to last through all the seasons, but in the season of Autumn we start to doubt ourselves if we are strong enough to go through the two last seasons.
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Comment Written 01-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2017
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Thank you so much Sandra, for giving this a view and review. :)
Missy
