A Lifetime of Love
True Love never dies28 total reviews
Comment from patcelaw
Love that is solid and ground ed in respect for the one we love never fails. I enjoyed this poem and would love to see you write more on the subject. Many blessings for a wonderful day. Patricia
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2017
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Love that is solid and ground ed in respect for the one we love never fails. I enjoyed this poem and would love to see you write more on the subject. Many blessings for a wonderful day. Patricia
Comment Written 01-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from artemis53
I read this one three times (maybe I'm just slow) but it's a theme dear to me. "Life's born, Love's found Life's lived, Love's sound Life dies, Love's bound." I've now found this all to be true. No matter what, Love goes on forever.
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2017
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I read this one three times (maybe I'm just slow) but it's a theme dear to me. "Life's born, Love's found Life's lived, Love's sound Life dies, Love's bound." I've now found this all to be true. No matter what, Love goes on forever.
Comment Written 01-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2017
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Thank YOU, I have had 3 and 4 stars for this one, as some can not understand what I meant by Sound, (STRONG, RELIABLE) you have understood many, many thanks****kahpot
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I find it to be irresponsible to give out 3 or 4 stars if one does not 'get' a poem.
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I agree, I know I am not the best reviewer, but I do view many if I think I understand I will review, on what It means to me if I cannot get the gist of it, I will read that work over again, if I fail then I will read more of that persons work and try to get a grasp, many thanks****kahpot
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
The story of love and its journey through life and all I can say is that if love appears throughout your life, then you have been blessed, a poignant write, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2017
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The story of love and its journey through life and all I can say is that if love appears throughout your life, then you have been blessed, a poignant write, love Dolly x
Comment Written 01-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2017
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Thank you very much, and I (only early) but think I have been****kahpot
Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
This is a nice little piece. Simple, straightforward and on point. Love is such a varied thing it's impossible to sum up but you do a great job here.
All the best
GMG
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2017
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Hi there,
This is a nice little piece. Simple, straightforward and on point. Love is such a varied thing it's impossible to sum up but you do a great job here.
All the best
GMG
Comment Written 01-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about love and how we can find it in our lives, without doing much effort. We can see and experience it daily if we are willing to look at things around us and accept what life offers.
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2017
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A very well-written poem about love and how we can find it in our lives, without doing much effort. We can see and experience it daily if we are willing to look at things around us and accept what life offers.
Comment Written 01-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2017
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Thank you very much, and yes accept your feelings, and life will come****kahpot
Comment from twotock
Simple, poignant and direct. My only confusion is with 'love's sound' in relation to 'life's lived'. Maybe you can explain this relation to me. Otherwise, I like it and it is a refreshing break from the norm.
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reply by the author on 01-Dec-2017
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Simple, poignant and direct. My only confusion is with 'love's sound' in relation to 'life's lived'. Maybe you can explain this relation to me. Otherwise, I like it and it is a refreshing break from the norm.
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Comment Written 01-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2017
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Thank you, firstly I do not understand only 3 stars, Sound as in solid, a sound relationship****kahpot
Comment from lyenochka
Well done with short three lines with the structure of repetition of Life and Love. In life, we are blessed if we find Love and it keeps us "sound." And even beyond life, after death, Love continues. Great work rhyming all three lines.
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2017
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Well done with short three lines with the structure of repetition of Life and Love. In life, we are blessed if we find Love and it keeps us "sound." And even beyond life, after death, Love continues. Great work rhyming all three lines.
Comment Written 01-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from c_lucas
The fruit of Love can occur at any time. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read. There is very good imagery. Good job.
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reply by the author on 01-Dec-2017
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The fruit of Love can occur at any time. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read. There is very good imagery. Good job.
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Comment Written 01-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
