A Lifetime of Love
True Love never dies28 total reviews
Comment from LIJ Red
I have a sneaky notion more good lives are dragged down by unsolid loves than meth or crack, but then I live alone in the woods. You don't name this one, but I have seen so many one-liners and 2/4/2s and six word poems, it looks fine.
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I have a sneaky notion more good lives are dragged down by unsolid loves than meth or crack, but then I live alone in the woods. You don't name this one, but I have seen so many one-liners and 2/4/2s and six word poems, it looks fine.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from Dean Kuch
The unyielding, unending, endless cycle of life, love and death is a beautiful concept, kahpot.
I don't know if I buy into the love portion completely as I've not been too lucky with relationships. And I'm speaking of the type of love that a man has for a woman, of course.
My children and my family I love unconditionally.
I really enjoy seeing writers inspired by other writers. After all, that's why we o this thing called writing, sin't it?
Nice work!
~Dean
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2017
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The unyielding, unending, endless cycle of life, love and death is a beautiful concept, kahpot.
I don't know if I buy into the love portion completely as I've not been too lucky with relationships. And I'm speaking of the type of love that a man has for a woman, of course.
My children and my family I love unconditionally.
I really enjoy seeing writers inspired by other writers. After all, that's why we o this thing called writing, sin't it?
Nice work!
~Dean
Comment Written 02-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2017
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Thank you Dean, much appreciated as always****kahpot
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Anytime...
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
Wow simple and yet you nailed it completely.
YOu lived whole lives in just these short lines, from the start of life to the continuation of true love
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Wow simple and yet you nailed it completely.
YOu lived whole lives in just these short lines, from the start of life to the continuation of true love
Comment Written 01-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
I totally get what you mean and this is amazing. I am very impressed and hope it does well in the competition as a different sort of poem from the usual. Excellent job in turning a subject on it's head kind regards and well done xxx
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I totally get what you mean and this is amazing. I am very impressed and hope it does well in the competition as a different sort of poem from the usual. Excellent job in turning a subject on it's head kind regards and well done xxx
Comment Written 01-Dec-2017
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Thank you very muc****kahpot
Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
This is a very lovely love poem you've penned, my friend. It's simple and to the point, saying so much with very little words. ~Kerry
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This is a very lovely love poem you've penned, my friend. It's simple and to the point, saying so much with very little words. ~Kerry
Comment Written 01-Dec-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
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Welcome
Comment from mermaids
This is an excellent poem. I love the strong beat and your use of words. There is almost a musical feel to your poem and the second part of each line shows love in action.
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This is an excellent poem. I love the strong beat and your use of words. There is almost a musical feel to your poem and the second part of each line shows love in action.
Comment Written 01-Dec-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a lovely poem about love.
The picture is beautiful and a good match for your poem describing love.
You really say much in your few short words. Well done.
Sharon
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I think this is a lovely poem about love.
The picture is beautiful and a good match for your poem describing love.
You really say much in your few short words. Well done.
Sharon
Comment Written 01-Dec-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from apky
This is not just succinct, it's simple, straight up and poignant. I liked the welding of 'love's sound' with 'life's lived'. Loving in life is very auditory, and living in love actually demands being heard repeatedly.
Brilliant. I wish I had a six left...
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This is not just succinct, it's simple, straight up and poignant. I liked the welding of 'love's sound' with 'life's lived'. Loving in life is very auditory, and living in love actually demands being heard repeatedly.
Brilliant. I wish I had a six left...
Comment Written 01-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2017
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Thank you very much, you read this as it was meant, many thanks****kahpot
Comment from Thomas Bowling
I'm surprised there isn't contest for this.It's definitely a winner. Your poem speaks volumes in a few short lines. It takes the reader through all of the steps of life and love.
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2017
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I'm surprised there isn't contest for this.It's definitely a winner. Your poem speaks volumes in a few short lines. It takes the reader through all of the steps of life and love.
Comment Written 01-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2017
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Thank you very much, I am glad someone has read it right****kahpot
Comment from DR DIP
The poem so short but yet so true. Each phases of love expressed so succinctly.
Your accompanying image says it all. Thanks for sharing these very relevant words with us
dip
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2017
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The poem so short but yet so true. Each phases of love expressed so succinctly.
Your accompanying image says it all. Thanks for sharing these very relevant words with us
dip
Comment Written 01-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
