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Comment from Liberty Justice
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My goodness, Ricky, you poor baby! You went through such a rough painful ordeal and surgeries and I am so sorry for your pain. You describe in chronological and vivid descriptions all your medical procedures. WELL DONE! May God Bless me and mine, you and yours and May God Bless America. lol truly liberty justice

 Comment Written 02-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 02-Dec-2017
    thanks Liberty and be sure to catch my latest post about heaven and hell and there are many fans Dory and Friends mentioned in it and you're one of them thanks dr. Ricky 1024
Comment from Paul Bownas
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I didn't think it was violent, just a little bit terrifying! I am not sure Dear Dr. if this is a true story, but it certainly sounds like it is? If that is the case, I'm extremely glad that you are now well. I couldn't fault the writing though.

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 02-Dec-2017
    Thanks Paul and yes it was real I lost 40 lb when I got home I Wade 240 when I waited and I was 204 when I came home the pain was so bad at times I a s heavenly father just to take me or make the pain go away I've learned to important lesson to take better care of your house specially when you get in your 60s and don't let something drag out even if it's not causing you any pain at least go and getting it a second opinion from qualified medical doctor thanks and be sure to catch my latest piece about heaven and hell I do believe it's quite incredible at 1077 words doctor Ricky 1024
reply by Paul Bownas on 02-Dec-2017
    You are welcome, and I am delighted to hear that you are now well. God bless
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2017
    Yeah I'm ready for round two but not with something like that I'm one of those people that have nine lives I've been run over 3 times on my bicycle by cars and had heart attacks a broken leg which I have an 18 inch rod and it was broken at 6 places I have brain damage I fall asleep at the wheel and total of $40,000 Lincoln die total two motorcycles survived 3 suicide attempts after I lost my son and wife that was too much to handle and then I just keep pushing forward so I'm just waiting for the next altercation to come and I'll just pick it apart eat it up and spit it out like I always do thanks dr. Ricky 1024
reply by Paul Bownas on 02-Dec-2017
    My heart goes out to you, I can't believe that someone could cope with all of that, but you have! God bless, and good luck to you!
Comment from Brigitte Elko
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This was quite a story to read. Health issues often become complicated and want to make you die. I'm glad you are still around to write. I noticed some punctuation issues when reading, misplaced quotation marks and question marks. Also I noted some flaws below.No offense meant, maybe editing?
*lasted a full day weak?
*change spelling to response on my cell phone
*name what was perforated for clarity
*subconscious to subconsciousness
*change feed to fed me with that
*change your to you're ready to come home
*tpay to today

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 01-Dec-2017
    Thanks Bridget for your time in response when I read somebody's works if I point out the grammar issues I always give them their full credit for their peace that they're rioting in their structured poem and I don't take any credit away for grammar issues so at least she pointed out a couple of things I'll recheck that in decide whether or not it's necessary to fix them thanks for this in your time dr. Ricky 1024
reply by Brigitte Elko on 02-Dec-2017
    You are welcome.
    brigitte
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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I was afraid to read your write because it brought back memories of my husband and how he suffered from the same operation. Your words are honest and real and I sincerely hope you have recovered now Ricky. Love Dolly x

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 01-Dec-2017
    Between you and me Dolly it got so bad in the hospital the medication didn't help I asked I told the nurse they shoot horses for less pain in this the guy in the room next to me was moaning all the time in the nurse came in and apologize cuz he was dying I said why I think he's got the better deal that's how bad it got for a Time. I asked heavenly father to either make the pain go away or to take me to heaven cuz I couldn't take it much longer the doctor wasn't any better the way he treated me ripping my bandages off and squeezing to get the infection out I was terrible then he expected me to go and exercise and breathe on this breathing machine because somebody my age could come down with pneumonia and and he kept sitting there breathing amount higher and higher won't let me leave until I was able to do that but that was then and the wound is healing but it's not completely healed of it all the time which I shouldn't but the memory never will thanks dr. Ricky 1024
reply by Dolly'sPoems on 01-Dec-2017
    I am so sorry to hear your story Ricky and my husband suffered badly too and he sadly died not long after the operation because the wound was too bad to heal. It?s a terrible business and I?m glad you have survived even though you have these awful memories, I wish you well, love Dolly x
Comment from kahpot
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What a wonderfully written story, and it must have been hard to endure such pain and continuous vomiting, and I am glad it is all getting better, very well done****kahpot

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 01-Dec-2017
    Best k a h p o t for going through my pain doctor Richard 1024
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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This speaks some bad and side cumulative effect of Neosporin on an open wound, poet had an operation and now only he is recovering; I like. DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 01-Dec-2017
    Thanks I appreciate her for going through my pain doctor Ricky 1024