Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Excellent

Yes this is a good haiku. Love the imagery of the lamb feeding on grass and then the eagle making it the lambs last meal. Very well done

 Comment Written 27-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 27-Nov-2017

Thank you for the compliments, Barb. You're certainly not one of those reviewers who don't read the posts, and copy and paste the same reviews to everybody (trying to catch up to you in the reviewing standings).

reply by Barb Hensongispsaca on 28-Nov-2017

I love it when I write stories with twists and no one reads the last lines.lol

Comment from Sasha

Excellent

Great job with this contest entry. I get the feeling the eagle has bitten off more than he can chew this time. Excellent work with this one and I sincerely wish you all the best in this contest.

 Comment Written 27-Nov-2017

Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

A good entry for the Nature Haiku writing prompt.
A lot said in a few short words, not easy to do.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon

 Comment Written 27-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 27-Nov-2017

Thank you for your insightful comments, Sharon.

Comment from kiwigirl2821

Excellent

Ouch Ogden, some wonderful creature is just about to have his dinner! An inspiring write and beautifully presented as well. good luck in your contest. xoxo Kiwi

 Comment Written 27-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 27-Nov-2017

I think he 'd better share it with his mate and chicks. Even eagles can get bellyaches. Thank you for your encouraging comments, Kiwigirl.