Comment from Gert sherwood

Excellent

Hello author smiles to you writing an Ode to the moon
I liked it very much when you said

I wished ((wish) you gave us sons or daughters,
they could beat you in beauty,
or if they couldn't be similar to you.
OH BEAUTIFUL MOON.
WE WILL ALWAYS LOVE AND CHERISE YOU.

Best to you in this contest.
Gert

 Comment Written 25-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 25-Nov-2017

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely and blessed Sunday.

reply by Gert sherwood on 25-Nov-2017

You are so welcome
Gert

Comment from ronnie k

Excellent

Great personalizing the subject matter, each well placed line drew me closer and closer to not seeing this love was not a man to women nor women to man but a love for the joy and beauty of the MOON.

 Comment Written 25-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 25-Nov-2017

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely and blessed Sunday.

Comment from Liberty Justice

Excellent

How darling, an ode to the moon. Girl looks so sexy and loving in photo. Author shows love and admiration for the moon and expresses sentiments in a literary way. truly, liberty justice

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 Comment Written 25-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 25-Nov-2017

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely and blessed Sunday.