Newborn
1-6-1 poem13 total reviews
Comment from Joan E.
You captured the special experience of birth with these very few syllables and rhyme. Adding the evocative artwork helped to establish the mood. Best wishes in the contest- Joan
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2017
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You captured the special experience of birth with these very few syllables and rhyme. Adding the evocative artwork helped to establish the mood. Best wishes in the contest- Joan
Comment Written 25-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2017
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Hi Joan, Thanks for reading my poem. Just to let you know it came third so many thanks for a look in cheers Chrtistine
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Congratulations on having your poem so well received in the contest. Happy holidays- Joan
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Thanks Joan it was great to do well
Comment from Liberty Justice
VERY Heart warming photo of newborn baby. Your poem is so short and sweet with a deep philosophical statement about life. Makes great entry for contest. truly, liberty justice
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2017
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VERY Heart warming photo of newborn baby. Your poem is so short and sweet with a deep philosophical statement about life. Makes great entry for contest. truly, liberty justice
Comment Written 25-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2017
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Hi Liberty Justice, Thanks very much for reading my poem and I hope it resonates with many, it is true babies bring merriment Cheers
Comment from PoemsOfDD
Chrissy, this is a good 1-6-1 poem. Although short it is well rhymed with each end word tying together perfectly allowing for the appreciation of the birth of a child. Great presentation as enhanced by the chosen picture. Great job! ~DD
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2017
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Chrissy, this is a good 1-6-1 poem. Although short it is well rhymed with each end word tying together perfectly allowing for the appreciation of the birth of a child. Great presentation as enhanced by the chosen picture. Great job! ~DD
Comment Written 25-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2017
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Hi DD? Many thanks for tour review and I immediately had this vision and found the perfect image. Yes babies do bring joy and merriment to our lives. Cheers
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, this is a difficult form to write, but you succeeded, and it complies fully with the prompt - smooth in movement and flow. Best of luck in the contest...
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2017
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In my opinion, this is a difficult form to write, but you succeeded, and it complies fully with the prompt - smooth in movement and flow. Best of luck in the contest...
Comment Written 24-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2017
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Hi evesayshi, Thanls for your review and best of luck wishes. ypir comments are encouraging Cheers
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You are very welcome...Eve
Comment from Eternal Muse
This is an excellent rendition of the 6-1-6 poem contest. What great message! You put volumes in these 3 lines about the joy of a newborn and the mirth on earth.
Wonderful! Should do very well in the contest, I wish you all the luck.
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2017
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This is an excellent rendition of the 6-1-6 poem contest. What great message! You put volumes in these 3 lines about the joy of a newborn and the mirth on earth.
Wonderful! Should do very well in the contest, I wish you all the luck.
Comment Written 24-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2017
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Hi ytbard, Thanks very much for you review and compliment for my 1-6-1 Also for yoir wwell wish in this contest we will wait and see. Cheers
Comment from Brigitte Elko
This a beautiful image and poem. If I am correct, the second line should rhyme in this format. I may be wrong. I really did like this and hope that it is in the contest.
Will change the rating after you check if the format is correct. All the examples have all three lines rhyming.
Blessings,
brigitte
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2017
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This a beautiful image and poem. If I am correct, the second line should rhyme in this format. I may be wrong. I really did like this and hope that it is in the contest.
Will change the rating after you check if the format is correct. All the examples have all three lines rhyming.
Blessings,
brigitte
Comment Written 24-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2017
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Hi Brigitte. Thanks for reading this poem . I Am pretty sure Birth. Earth and Mirth all rhyme. They all don't have to have the same spelling i.e irth Earth as long as they sound the same and when checked with words sounding the same these three words were all in the list .I checked with words sounding like Birth and the other two were in the list. Hope that helps. But I do appreciate your review and support Cheers
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 1-6-1 poem. Each newborn child is another child on earth that we need to feed. Sometimes the child is lucky with caring parents, other times he suffers his whole life without anyone caring.
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2017
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A very well-written 1-6-1 poem. Each newborn child is another child on earth that we need to feed. Sometimes the child is lucky with caring parents, other times he suffers his whole life without anyone caring.
Comment Written 24-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2017
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Hi Sandra, Yes that is true I suppose it does depend on their circumstances bit I hope for most part it is a joyous occasion. Thanls for reading Cheers
Comment from marybell1
I enjoyed reading your 1-6-1 poem Birth". You followed all the rules for this genre and your poem said it all.
All the best,.
Marybell1.
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2017
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I enjoyed reading your 1-6-1 poem Birth". You followed all the rules for this genre and your poem said it all.
All the best,.
Marybell1.
Comment Written 24-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2017
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Hi Marybell1. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing my 1-6-1 Cheers for your best wishes
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You are most welcome.
Marybell1.
Comment from Thomas Bowling
You've written a very clever poem. All the lines rhyme perfectly. That's no small feat on a 1-6-1 poem, but you make it look effortless. It's very well done.
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2017
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You've written a very clever poem. All the lines rhyme perfectly. That's no small feat on a 1-6-1 poem, but you make it look effortless. It's very well done.
Comment Written 23-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2017
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Hi Thomas, Thanks very much and sometimes these little poems are difficult but I love these challenges and hope others find my work interesting Cheers for your time
Comment from zekeziemann
Great idea and well written. Nothing as precious as a new born...I was fortunate enough to have a boy and girl. A son is a son until he takes a wife a daughter is a daughter all of her life.
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2017
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Great idea and well written. Nothing as precious as a new born...I was fortunate enough to have a boy and girl. A son is a son until he takes a wife a daughter is a daughter all of her life.
Comment Written 23-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2017
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Hi zekeziemann. Thanks for your review and comments I was lucky enough to have A daughter and two sons and now have 4 grandaughters so feeling blessed. Cheers
