Comment from Abby Wilson-hand

Exceptional

AMAZING MIND YOU HAVE A GIFT TO WRITE
MY FRIEND EXCPECIALY WHEN WRITING ABOUT JAY
I LOVE TO READ OF YOUR SON

 Comment Written 23-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 23-Nov-2017

Hi Abby thanks for this I appreciate it this is Jason's this is Jason's birth month so anything that I write is beautiful I wrote for a bishop and a pastor in charge of Ocean County and Monmouth County Church I went to that was a friend of mine to church there Assembly of God churches and he ate when I hand it to him I put it on one of my address labels on it and the guy he was 35 years the head Pastor for Ocean County Medical and 46 years for Ellis County prosecutor's office so when he wrote me back and thanked me for the beautiful poem I gave them that was very special and I'm not a pastor on the Latter Day Saint priest of the Church of Jesus Christ and now he he wrote To Me Pastor Richard smrokowski so maybe one day I will be meant to have my own church I always dreamed about that God gave me this gift and I love light writing everything but on Sundays are so basically religious thanks again and I hope you enjoyed your Thanksgiving

reply by Abby Wilson-hand on 24-Nov-2017

that would make an excellent story

Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin

Excellent

Hi, Ricky

= I like that this comes from Jay's POV.
= Through your writing, he is telling you, "It's okay, Dad, I'm okay."
= Beautifully written, my friend.

Cheers, J
*** HAPPY HOLIDAYS! ***
(*<*) A Smile Is Just A Frown Turned Upside-down. (*<*)

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 22-Nov-2017

Thanks Jackson as you take it the Gulf of your wine or sip of your milk and eat the turkey we must always be thanks for the giving to the Lord for what we still have here behind and I say these things of course in the name of Jesus Christ amen

Comment from H. Rebecca

Good

I believe dad should be capitalized. It is at the end, but not all the way through. At the end you will have rainbow C. Is this a typo or stylistic choice?

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 22-Nov-2017

Yes to see wasn't meant to be there if it's talk through a cell phone of course and I do capitalize important words like God dad Life Death anything that's important to me thanks for your time and wonderful review doctor Ricky 1024

Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Excellent

I know, I know, this is very emotional and very well done. Yes, yes fly always together and know he is there always. Nicely done

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 22-Nov-2017

Thanks very much Barbara that's important coming from you considering your losses also Ricky

Comment from pbomar1115

Excellent

The is a story of love by a father to a child. Remembering the deceased child has to be hard when both of you were close. I can't say that this is something I'm familiar with because I'm a single person. My heart goes out to you.

Phillip

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 22-Nov-2017

The loss of a child is a parent's worst nightmare were meant to be buried our children not to have our children bury us but as I was writing this thinking of my son who gave his organs of course to save lives and and this is his birth month thanks for this review doctor Ricky 1024

reply by pbomar1115 on 22-Nov-2017

You're welcome, Ricky.

Phillip