Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Excellent

I love the inspiration you do with your wonderful writing and all the POV that you use to get your message across. I am very proud to know yu

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 22-Nov-2017

Haha you honor me number one not how it on this site I really appreciate that when I was dating a woman named Nancy she said my poetry would never amount to anything I said to her you wait and see when I'm driving buying a brand new Corvette and I'm on TV sitting down with Kelly and Ryan Seacrest talking about organ tissue donation and introducing My Gift of Life Book

Comment from kiwigirl2821

Excellent

hello Ricky. It's a good story about Jason. I like that he wanted to donate his organs and give other people a chance. There are structure and spelling issues but, the piece gets your message across beautifully. xoxo deborah

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 22-Nov-2017

Thanks for enjoying the memories of me through my son Jason and Jason's life doctor Ricky 1024

Comment from Walu Feral

Excellent

G'day Ricky.

Very heartfelt work, mate.

They are amazing stats waiting for donation organs. It's kind of like a sad lottery, I guess.

What instrument did you play in the band? I'm a singer and still do gigs here in the Philippines today.

Well done.

Cheers Fez

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 22-Nov-2017

Hey walu my son was the musician he started the band called four ways to save you save for people's lives he played he was a percussionist so he played the drums and keyboard and everything that went along with it Ricky

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Your write is emotional and heartfelt, and getting this down on paper is therapeutic and helpful. Your write would benefit greatly from punctuation which would make it easier to read, I wish you well, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 22-Nov-2017

Thanks, Dr.Ricky
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