My Book of Poems 2010-2017
Viewing comments for Chapter 67 "Wishing"a collection of my poetry
41 total reviews
Comment from Dean Kuch
I agree, Patty.
It is very important to hold onto our dreams.
Dreams cause us to create goals, and goals force us to be productive.
But only if we're serious about achieving those goals, of course.
Sure, sometimes it's hard, grueling work. But anything worth having's worth working for.
Congratulations on you win.
~Dean
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2017
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I agree, Patty.
It is very important to hold onto our dreams.
Dreams cause us to create goals, and goals force us to be productive.
But only if we're serious about achieving those goals, of course.
Sure, sometimes it's hard, grueling work. But anything worth having's worth working for.
Congratulations on you win.
~Dean
Comment Written 12-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2017
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Hi, Dean;
Dreams are the best thing in life. They are free and limitless. May you enjoy the season!!
~patty~
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You're welcome, Patty and the same to you!
~Dean :)
Comment from terry drake
You got the meaning of Christmas in a 5-7-5 poem. That is not easy to convey your inner thoughts in such short and restricted verse. Good job, well done thank you.
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2017
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You got the meaning of Christmas in a 5-7-5 poem. That is not easy to convey your inner thoughts in such short and restricted verse. Good job, well done thank you.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2017
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Hi there;
Thank you so much for your congratulations on my win. I'm glad the simplicity allowed for the deeper meaning in the words,
~patty~
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keep writing
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keep writing
Comment from Cedar
This is a beautiful piece about a subject that I'm sure we all have done many times, wishing upon a star. The presentation is also gorgeous.
Congratulations on winning the contest...Bill
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2017
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This is a beautiful piece about a subject that I'm sure we all have done many times, wishing upon a star. The presentation is also gorgeous.
Congratulations on winning the contest...Bill
Comment Written 12-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2017
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Hi there;
Please excuse the 'cut and paste' acknowledgment of your review. I'm taking a short break from Christmas preparation and packing for my move, so my time is somewhat limited.
Thank you so much for reading my work. I appreciate your time to critique and review.
May you and yours have a wonderful holiday season. MERRY CHRISTMAS!!!
~patty~
Comment from Poetic Friend
Congratulations, Patty. I did not see this poem on its original posting, but then again, I am not on the site everyday.
I can see why this poem won the contest. The poem offers hope, prayer, faith, and dreams. You said so much with a few words.
Again, this win is well-deserved. Bravo!
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2017
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Congratulations, Patty. I did not see this poem on its original posting, but then again, I am not on the site everyday.
I can see why this poem won the contest. The poem offers hope, prayer, faith, and dreams. You said so much with a few words.
Again, this win is well-deserved. Bravo!
Comment Written 12-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2017
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Hi there;
Please excuse the 'cut and paste' acknowledgment of your review. I'm taking a short break from Christmas preparation and packing for my move, so my time is somewhat limited.
Thank you so much for reading my work. I appreciate your time to critique and review.
May you and yours have a wonderful holiday season. MERRY CHRISTMAS!!!
~patty~
(thank you so much for your congratulations!)
Comment from Contests
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2017
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 A contest winning entry! A seven star rating from the Contest Committee for posting the winning contest entry. |
Comment Written 12-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2017
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Dearest Committee;
Thank you so much for recognizing my poetry as a winner of the contest. I am honored you found my work to be worthy of a seven-star rating,
~patty~
Comment from Asem.inspirations
Good morning again, Patty: Yes, I checked the syllable count and of course it is all correct. I do know what you mean though because some people do count certain words with the wrong syllable count. They count certain words as two syllables when they are actually three. (lol)
I agree, dreaming can't be wrong. Dreams are another gift that comes from God so dream on and prayer is always important. Put it all in His so worthy Hands. He is truly capable. Your post is splendid.
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2017
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Good morning again, Patty: Yes, I checked the syllable count and of course it is all correct. I do know what you mean though because some people do count certain words with the wrong syllable count. They count certain words as two syllables when they are actually three. (lol)
I agree, dreaming can't be wrong. Dreams are another gift that comes from God so dream on and prayer is always important. Put it all in His so worthy Hands. He is truly capable. Your post is splendid.
Comment Written 24-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2017
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Hi Tier;
We just bought a house, so we will be moving soon!!!
Super excited,
~patty~
Comment from rtobaygo
Good afternoon, Patty
One's faith can have one wishing that their prayers will be answered, that hope will defeat doubt, that faith will see us through trying times.
Take care and say safe,
Ray
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2017
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Good afternoon, Patty
One's faith can have one wishing that their prayers will be answered, that hope will defeat doubt, that faith will see us through trying times.
Take care and say safe,
Ray
Comment Written 23-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2017
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Hi, Ray;
It's all good. We found a house, and we will be moving in mid-January; have a few projects to finish first, Thank you for your prayers!
~patty~
Comment from Natali Holden
That last line is perfect. Dreaming is definitely not wrong. The picture works well with this. The syllable count is correct. Good luck in the contest!
Natali ;)
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2017
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That last line is perfect. Dreaming is definitely not wrong. The picture works well with this. The syllable count is correct. Good luck in the contest!
Natali ;)
Comment Written 23-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2017
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Hi, Natali;
Thank you for reading my little poem.
This was a prayer and a wish,
~patty~
Comment from Sharon Haiste
This is a lovely poem with an equally lovely picture to match it.
You have managed the 5-7-5 nicely.
Thank you for sharing this one with us and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2017
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This is a lovely poem with an equally lovely picture to match it.
You have managed the 5-7-5 nicely.
Thank you for sharing this one with us and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 23-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2017
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Hi, Sharon;
Thank you for reading my little poem.
This was a prayer and a wish,
~patty~
Comment from Rasmine
Hello, Patty,
I hope this means you got the house!
I didn't know prayer was two syllables -- you learn something every day.
I hope you aren't running around like a mule on steroids (I made this up to avoid an overused cliche, LOL). I haven't started to cook yet. We aren't eating until 4:30 so I have time, I hope. (I ALWAYS think I have time when I don't.)
Happy Thanksgiving!!
Nome
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2017
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Hello, Patty,
I hope this means you got the house!
I didn't know prayer was two syllables -- you learn something every day.
I hope you aren't running around like a mule on steroids (I made this up to avoid an overused cliche, LOL). I haven't started to cook yet. We aren't eating until 4:30 so I have time, I hope. (I ALWAYS think I have time when I don't.)
Happy Thanksgiving!!
Nome
Comment Written 23-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2017
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Hi, Nome;
Thank you for reading my little poem.
This was a prayer and a wish,
~patty~
