Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin

Excellent

Hi, Dawn

= Well, heck--do I know you?? (*,*) It was great chatting with you last night.
= This is such a beautifully written poem for the holidays, and contest.
= Awesome artwork, too. Good luck, my friend.

Cheers, J
*** Happy Holidays ***
(*.*) A Smile Is Just A Smile Turned Upside-down (*.*)


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 Comment Written 20-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 20-Nov-2017

:) Yes, it was great chin-wagging! :) Thanks very much - . I'll have to come back later, though - feeling a little off - gonna lie down. XX

Comment from doggymad

Excellent

I love this poem Dawn. It is true that with all our technology we would probably dismiss this event as a work of fiction.

I like that you have drawn attention to the real meaning of Christmas and the sacrifices that were made for us undeserving people

hugs

Freda

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 Comment Written 20-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 20-Nov-2017

Thank you so much. I'll have to come back later, though - feeling a little off - gonna lie down. XX

reply by doggymad on 20-Nov-2017

Take care of yourself xx