Precious Silence
ABC Poetry Contest Submission22 total reviews
Comment from Liberty Justice
How provocative and deeply profoundly spiritual. Seems woman in photo values silence and loves it when she has free time to herself to be quiet. Indeed, must love it when she talks to nobody. Truly, liberty justice
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How provocative and deeply profoundly spiritual. Seems woman in photo values silence and loves it when she has free time to herself to be quiet. Indeed, must love it when she talks to nobody. Truly, liberty justice
Comment Written 22-Nov-2017
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
There is so much in this ABC poem, Ida, that fills the senses. Your vivid imagery in words is a joy to read, and see deep inside. Those silent moments are rare so all the more precious when they come. Well done, this is a fine contest entry. Good luck. Sandra xx
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There is so much in this ABC poem, Ida, that fills the senses. Your vivid imagery in words is a joy to read, and see deep inside. Those silent moments are rare so all the more precious when they come. Well done, this is a fine contest entry. Good luck. Sandra xx
Comment Written 22-Nov-2017
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi, Idamarty
= Such a beautifully written poem about being consumed by a comforting, peaceful cocoon.
= Stunning artwork to complement. Excellent entry in the contest. Good Luck.
Cheers, J
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Hi, Idamarty
= Such a beautifully written poem about being consumed by a comforting, peaceful cocoon.
= Stunning artwork to complement. Excellent entry in the contest. Good Luck.
Cheers, J
*** Happy Holidays ***
(*.*) A Smile Is Just A Smile Turned Upside-down (*.*)
Comment Written 22-Nov-2017
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, a lovely and emotional write in its philosophical soliloquy, well constructed in its ABC form and fluid movement - conforms with the prompt easily and in lyric cadence. Best of luck in the contest...
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In my opinion, a lovely and emotional write in its philosophical soliloquy, well constructed in its ABC form and fluid movement - conforms with the prompt easily and in lyric cadence. Best of luck in the contest...
Comment Written 21-Nov-2017
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
This should be a winner, it is a perfect example of ABC poetry and free verse. Some say poems that don't rhyme are not poems just words on a page- they can be, but this is as beautiful, if not more, as any traditional rhyming poem. Well done good luck in the competition kind regards Meia xx
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This should be a winner, it is a perfect example of ABC poetry and free verse. Some say poems that don't rhyme are not poems just words on a page- they can be, but this is as beautiful, if not more, as any traditional rhyming poem. Well done good luck in the competition kind regards Meia xx
Comment Written 21-Nov-2017
Comment from rama devi
Excellent entry! I LIKE HOW THE FIRST LINE SOUNDS LIKE WHAT IS SAYS!
Rushing, gushing, life comes at me.
Love the image here and shift in tone:
Silence becomes my cocoon.
Nice personification:
Tenderly, it holds me,
Understanding my need.
Pitch perfect closing AHA:
Precious is the moment.
Fine work and presentation. Good luck!
Warmly, rd
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Excellent entry! I LIKE HOW THE FIRST LINE SOUNDS LIKE WHAT IS SAYS!
Rushing, gushing, life comes at me.
Love the image here and shift in tone:
Silence becomes my cocoon.
Nice personification:
Tenderly, it holds me,
Understanding my need.
Pitch perfect closing AHA:
Precious is the moment.
Fine work and presentation. Good luck!
Warmly, rd
Comment Written 21-Nov-2017
Comment from Sharon Haiste
A good ABC Poetry contest entry.
It tells a good story about escaping the crazy world in a cocoon of silence.
Your picture is a good match.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
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A good ABC Poetry contest entry.
It tells a good story about escaping the crazy world in a cocoon of silence.
Your picture is a good match.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 21-Nov-2017
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hi Idamarty, this is a very well written ABC poem for the contest entry. Written true to form with good wording. Very nice accompanying picture with a good overall display. Good luck in the contest. Warm regards Dorothy
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Hi Idamarty, this is a very well written ABC poem for the contest entry. Written true to form with good wording. Very nice accompanying picture with a good overall display. Good luck in the contest. Warm regards Dorothy
Comment Written 21-Nov-2017
Comment from Kaye Ouston
Beautifully written piece. I relate to this so well. I find solace in silence and peace in solitude. I think that this encapsulates the blissful state of silence. I wish you every success for the ABC Poetry Contest. Thank you for sharing your insight.
Best wishes
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Beautifully written piece. I relate to this so well. I find solace in silence and peace in solitude. I think that this encapsulates the blissful state of silence. I wish you every success for the ABC Poetry Contest. Thank you for sharing your insight.
Best wishes
Comment Written 21-Nov-2017
Comment from ruzu27
I like your poem very much.
"Silence becomes my cocoon", you write.
I can sense and "hear" the silence. It is indeed wonderful. You are tenderly hold by this precous moment.
Thank you so much for sharing this with us.
Ruth
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I like your poem very much.
"Silence becomes my cocoon", you write.
I can sense and "hear" the silence. It is indeed wonderful. You are tenderly hold by this precous moment.
Thank you so much for sharing this with us.
Ruth
Comment Written 21-Nov-2017
