My Book of Poems 2010-2017
Viewing comments for Chapter 68 "Home Search Lament"a collection of my poetry
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Comment from royowen
It makes one wonder what one has to do to obtain the house they desire. But I've always thought that those that have faith, will finish up with the right house, naive I may be, but there it is. Well done beautifully written minute poem, good luck to Patty, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2017
It makes one wonder what one has to do to obtain the house they desire. But I've always thought that those that have faith, will finish up with the right house, naive I may be, but there it is. Well done beautifully written minute poem, good luck to Patty, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 20-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2017
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Hi, Roy;
I'm trying to keep a brave front. The housing market in our area is fierce, and my wants/needs mirror those of others. I know it will happen the way its supposed to,
~patty~
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Chin up, good luck,
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written minute poem. Sorry that you missed out on the house, maybe it was not the best one but the better one will be come your way. Just wait patiently.
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2017
A very well-written minute poem. Sorry that you missed out on the house, maybe it was not the best one but the better one will be come your way. Just wait patiently.
Comment Written 20-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2017
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Hi, Sandra;
I don't do well with 'patience,' and so I rarely pray for some. Someone once told me that's the sure way to end up needing it!
Thank you for your understanding,
~patty~
Comment from patcelaw
Home ownership is a blessing, but it is also not such a blessing for one living on a limited budget and living alone. My hose will be sold in the spring as I already have a buyer. Patricia
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2017
Home ownership is a blessing, but it is also not such a blessing for one living on a limited budget and living alone. My hose will be sold in the spring as I already have a buyer. Patricia
Comment Written 20-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2017
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Hi, Patricia;
Congratulations on selling your house. I know it will be sad to leave your place, but think of it as a new adventure when you move up north.
~patty~
Comment from TAB_that's me
Oh no. Too bad about the other house - that sucks. Do you just rent now? Owning is great. I hope you find one soon.
Perfect minute form.
teresa
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reply by the author on 20-Nov-2017
Oh no. Too bad about the other house - that sucks. Do you just rent now? Owning is great. I hope you find one soon.
Perfect minute form.
teresa
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Comment Written 20-Nov-2017
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Hi, Teresa;
Yup; we sold our house when the kids went out on their own, and we've been just renting and doing the things we want -- but its time to find a house to settle in. I miss the little bit of gardening I do and just being able to paint a color I want AND not have to deal with noisy upstairs neighbors!
~patty~
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I enjoyed reading your wanting a home poem. I do understand. Between now and the first of the year my class of children traditionally change due to moves. I don't understand it.
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reply by the author on 20-Nov-2017
I enjoyed reading your wanting a home poem. I do understand. Between now and the first of the year my class of children traditionally change due to moves. I don't understand it.
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Comment Written 20-Nov-2017
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Hi, Barbara;
Yup; we sold our house when the kids went out on their own, and we've been just renting and doing the things we want -- but its time to find a house to settle in. I miss the little bit of gardening I do and just being able to paint a color I want AND not have to deal with noisy upstairs neighbors!
~patty~