Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

Merry Christmas.
This is a good 2-4-2 Poetry contest entry.
Concise and a clear picture. The picture that you have posted with it says it all.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 20-Nov-2017

Hi, Sharon;
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing my little Christmas poem. I think I'm more excited this year - both grandkids are aware of 'Santa.'
~patty~

Comment from Bichon

Excellent

A lovely short poem. You really covered the excitement that little kids have on Christmas waiting for Santa. I could feel the joy through the words!

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 19-Nov-2017

Hi, Chloe;
Kids? I'm super excited about Santa --- it is wonderful when you're a parent or grandparent of little kids - you get to enjoy it all over again,

~patty~

reply by the author on 19-Nov-2017

Hi, Chloe;
Kids? I'm super excited about Santa --- it is wonderful when you're a parent or grandparent of little kids - you get to enjoy it all over again,

~patty~

Comment from Poetic Friend

Excellent

Patty,

This poem certainly places the reader in the Christmas spirit, Any child or adult would enjoy this poem.

You made great usage of word economy, making every syllable and word count, without sounding forced and yet, maintaining the poetic flair.

Good luck in the contest, Patty. Enjoy the reminder of your weekend.

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 19-Nov-2017

Hi there;
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. It sounds as though my poem gave you exactly the meaning I was trying to get across,

~patty~

Comment from smileycloud

Excellent

so simple
yet so HUGE with it's excitement and glee
blessings
have a smiley day

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 19-Nov-2017

Hi there;
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing,

~patty~

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very well written 2-4-2 poem you have penned for the contest. You used very cute wording that went well with your art work you chose. Best wishes in the contest. Teri

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 18-Nov-2017

Hi, Teri;
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing my little Christmas poem,

~patty~

Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin

Excellent

Hi, Patty

= This is such a cute Christmas 2-4-2 entry.
= A really fun pix, too.
= Hope you do well in the contest. Good Luck.

Cheers, J
*** Happy Holidays ***
(*.*) A Smile Is Just A Smile Turned Upside-down (*.*)


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 Comment Written 18-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 18-Nov-2017

Hi, Jax;
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing my little, and I do mean little, poem.

~patty~

Comment from Sasha

Excellent

It is hard to believe it really is that time of year again. It is true, the older you get, the faster time passes by. Great job with this short poem and a terrific entry for this contest too. I wish you all the best.

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 Comment Written 18-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 18-Nov-2017

Hi, Sasha;
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing my little poem. YES - it is that time of year again!!

~patty~