Comment from Bucketlist

Excellent

A very cute, seasonally appropriate, contest entry. I don't see any grammatical errors. You have followed syllabication rules, you have entered the contest when you should, I have not a thing to pick on. ADid I write 150 characters yet? LOL
Hugs,Trisha

 Comment Written 20-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 20-Nov-2017

Hi, Trisha;
Thank you for reading my little Christmas poem. I feel you on the whole 150 characters,

~patty~

Comment from TAB_that's me

Excellent

Oh why does santa only come once a year? can't he come today? lol.

Great little 2-4-2 poem in perfect form. Good luck in the contest.

teresa

 Comment Written 20-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 20-Nov-2017

Hi, Teresa;
Right? I'm so glad we are entering this holiday season - I just love Christmas!

~patty~

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

This is very cute and so true. I remember, as a kid, listening for every little sound before falling asleep on Christmas Eve and the excitement with anticipation. Good luck in the contest. Marilyn

 Comment Written 20-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 20-Nov-2017

Hi, Marilyn;
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing my little Christmas poem. I think I'm more excited this year - both grandkids are aware of 'Santa.'
~patty~

reply by BeasPeas on 20-Nov-2017

Children do make the holiday for us. I find that I'm quite excited myself this year. I hope you get good news on your house soon. You will have to let us all know what happens. The right and perfect house will be there for you--don't worry. Marilyn

reply by the author on 20-Nov-2017

Hi, Marilyn;
We didn't get the house on Sesame Street (the one in the picture - the other offer was accepted.) So, we are looking at two houses this afternoon.

Thank you for your prayers and concern,
~patty~

reply by BeasPeas on 20-Nov-2017

Patty--I know you're disappointed, but the right and perfect house will be there for you--just waiting, waiting. Let me know. Marilyn

Comment from rtobaygo

Excellent

Good morning, Patty

Ah, this time of year. In a few short words you've captured the thoughts and emotions of children waiting for Santa to appear.

Take care and stay safe,

Ray

 Comment Written 20-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 20-Nov-2017

Hi, Ray;
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing my little Christmas poem. I think I'm more excited this year - both grandkids are aware of 'Santa.'
~patty~

Comment from Angela VA

Excellent

This is a good entry for the contest. Nothing seems forced into the 2-4-2 format. The picture works perfectly for this poem. I hope Santa finds you in Virginia! :)

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 20-Nov-2017

Hi, Angela;
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing my little Christmas poem. I think I'm more excited this year - both grandkids are aware of 'Santa.'
~patty~

Comment from Natali Holden

Excellent

The picture is perfect for it! Your poem holds so much joy. For me, there is just this Christmas feeling. I wake up and it just feels like Christmas. That's what I like about your poem. Nice work! Good luck in the contest!
Natali ;)

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 20-Nov-2017

Hi, Natali;
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing my little Christmas poem. I think I'm more excited this year - both grandkids are aware of 'Santa.'
~patty~

Comment from sfharper

Excellent

Excellent offering for Christmas. It captures the excitement of the season. Good use of sounds to form the sensory connection of the season. 2-4-2 is short but you packed it well. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 20-Nov-2017

Hi there;
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing my little Christmas poem. I think I'm more excited this year - both grandkids are aware of 'Santa.'
~patty~

reply by sfharper on 22-Nov-2017

How exciting for a Christmas with young ones, MustangPatty1029, have a wonderful holiday season

Comment from frierajac

Exceptional

HO-HO-HO-HO! I find the formatting requirement is perfectly accomplished.
And it is a cheery blessing, so what's to say? Good Luck in the contest and keep up the good work, just like Santa.

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 20-Nov-2017

Hi there;
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing my little Christmas poem. I think I'm more excited this year - both grandkids are aware of 'Santa.'
~patty~
Thank you so much for the six-star rating

Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

I enjoyed your sharing your anticipation of the holiday season in this tiny poem. Your 2-4-2 is exuberant and your alliteration of "s's" adds to the energy. Best wishes in the contest- Joan

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 20-Nov-2017

Hi, Joan;
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing my little Christmas poem. I think I'm more excited this year - both grandkids are aware of 'Santa.'
~patty~

reply by Joan E. on 20-Nov-2017

Thank you for sharing your grandchildren's joy--my son is a forty-one-year-old bachelor; so, I enjoy your little ones vicariously. Happy holidays- Joan

Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson

Excellent

Yeah, Santa...lol. Terrific 2-4-2 contest entry, Patty, I love it and a cute perfect picture to go with it. Good luck! ~Kerry

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 19-Nov-2017

Hi, Kerry;
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. The big guy will be here in five weeks!

~patty~

reply by Kerry Foley Robinson on 25-Nov-2017

Your welcome, again sorry about the late replies:))) Santa's coming, YAY!!! lol