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Viewing comments for Chapter 94 "In Pain You shall Bear Children."
"ALL IN THE FAMILY."
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Comment from
Liberty Justice
WOW! Nine children! Just gave you a thumbs up putting you in first place, and hope you win. Tell me who you are after contest. Such a lovely powerful poem with an amazing photo. GOOD LUCK! WELL DONE. lol liberty justice
Comment Written 19-Nov-2017
Comment from
giraffmang
Hi there,
Nice job with this piece.
I was given a book on 'Hypnotherapy' which claimed that there is no pain in childbirth... the reason pain is felt is because women have been 'conditioned' over thousands of years to believe there is. This has been done by the Church as retribution for 'original sin'. Nice...
All the best
GMG
Comment Written 18-Nov-2017
Comment from
nancy_e_davis
Never the less it was worth every pain
to have children. They are the joy of
my life and I would gladly do it all again.
Well done my friend. Nancy
Comment Written 17-Nov-2017
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