My Book of Poems 2010-2017
Viewing comments for Chapter 70 "Patiently waiting..."a collection of my poetry
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Comment from RodG
I would definitely agree with you that "apartment living sucks" and the amenities of a house you listed certainly are the major attraction. Hopefully, the Speaker finds what she/he is looking for. Cinquain summarizes the argument very well.
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2017
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I would definitely agree with you that "apartment living sucks" and the amenities of a house you listed certainly are the major attraction. Hopefully, the Speaker finds what she/he is looking for. Cinquain summarizes the argument very well.
Comment Written 17-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2017
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Hi, Rod;
Thank you so much. I'm pretty sure we will know something before the weekend is over.
Good thing there's lots of television I want to watch!
~patty~
Comment from nancy_e_davis
Whatever will be, will be. When the answer does come, it will be the right one. Be patient. God works in mysterious ways. LOL We don't always get what we ask for, want, or deserve, but it is usually what we need. Good job Patty and good luck. I hope your prayers are answered. Nancy
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Whatever will be, will be. When the answer does come, it will be the right one. Be patient. God works in mysterious ways. LOL We don't always get what we ask for, want, or deserve, but it is usually what we need. Good job Patty and good luck. I hope your prayers are answered. Nancy
Comment Written 17-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2017
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Hi, Nancy;
Thank you so much. I'm pretty sure we will know something before the weekend is over.
Good thing there's lots of television I want to watch!
~patty~
Comment from LIJ Red
Well, Fanstory is back to it's old bad habit of trashing short reviews, instead of just asking for more characters.
What a pain. I said your cinquain looked excellent to me.
I'd say the hassle of housebuying sucks, too.
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2017
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Well, Fanstory is back to it's old bad habit of trashing short reviews, instead of just asking for more characters.
What a pain. I said your cinquain looked excellent to me.
I'd say the hassle of housebuying sucks, too.
Comment Written 17-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2017
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Hi there;
Thank you so much. I'm pretty sure we will know something before the weekend is over.
Good thing there's lots of television I want to watch!
~patty~
Comment from Thomas Bowling
God hears your prayers and knows your needs. Start packing. The Bible says whatsoever you ask in my name, believe you have it and it shall be yours. Jesus was the original teacher of the power of positive thinking.
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God hears your prayers and knows your needs. Start packing. The Bible says whatsoever you ask in my name, believe you have it and it shall be yours. Jesus was the original teacher of the power of positive thinking.
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Comment Written 17-Nov-2017
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Hi, Thomas;
I didn't quite start packing yet -- but I have started drafting the rooms and deciding where I'm going to put furniture!
Thank you so much. I'm pretty sure we will know something before the weekend is over.
Good thing there's lots of television I want to watch!
~patty~
Comment from Sasha
I am sympathetic to your situation. Trying to buy a home is a long, emotionally draining process that can drive the average person insane. I have my fingers crossed for you. This is an excellent entry for the Cinquain Poetry Contest. Perfect syllable count and tells a story far too many can relate to. I wish you all the best in this contest.
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I am sympathetic to your situation. Trying to buy a home is a long, emotionally draining process that can drive the average person insane. I have my fingers crossed for you. This is an excellent entry for the Cinquain Poetry Contest. Perfect syllable count and tells a story far too many can relate to. I wish you all the best in this contest.
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Comment Written 17-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2017
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Hi, Sasha;
Thank you so much. I'm pretty sure we will know something before the weekend is over.
Good thing there's lots of television I want to watch!
~patty~
