My Book of Poems 2010-2017
Viewing comments for Chapter 70 "Patiently waiting..."a collection of my poetry
45 total reviews
Comment from smileycloud
wow
beautiful place
prayers are with you for sure
your Cinquain is perfect
so is your home
blessings
have a smiley day
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2017
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wow
beautiful place
prayers are with you for sure
your Cinquain is perfect
so is your home
blessings
have a smiley day
Comment Written 17-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2017
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Hi there;
Thank you so much. I'm pretty sure we will know something before the weekend is over.
Good thing there's lots of television I want to watch!
~patty~
Comment from c_lucas
I'm a firm believer that one must dwell on what the want and depend on the Lord to deliver it. Very good job. Good luck in your search. (Fanstory is all screwed up.)
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2017
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I'm a firm believer that one must dwell on what the want and depend on the Lord to deliver it. Very good job. Good luck in your search. (Fanstory is all screwed up.)
Comment Written 17-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2017
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Hi, Charlie;
Thank you so much. I'm pretty sure we will know something before the weekend is over.
Good thing there's lots of television I want to watch!
~patty~
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With a mind like yours, Television is a waste of time.
Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
This is a terrific cinquain poem on your home to be, Patty.
Wow! What an amazing living room, so pretty. I hope you don't have to wait much longer:)) ~Kerry
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This is a terrific cinquain poem on your home to be, Patty.
Wow! What an amazing living room, so pretty. I hope you don't have to wait much longer:)) ~Kerry
Comment Written 17-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2017
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Hi, Kerry;
Thank you so much. I'm pretty sure we will know something before the weekend is over.
Good thing there's lots of television I want to watch!
~patty~
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That's terrific, Patty. Oh, You should check out the fire stick, My daughter bought us one QVC, You can watch everything, It's fantastic.
Comment from Heather Knight
Is this a picture of the actual house? I know what you mean when you say apartments suck.
I live in one in Madrid, but at the weekend I come to my lovely house and it's sooo great.
Good luck in the contest.
And I'll say a prayer so that you get the house.
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2017
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Is this a picture of the actual house? I know what you mean when you say apartments suck.
I live in one in Madrid, but at the weekend I come to my lovely house and it's sooo great.
Good luck in the contest.
And I'll say a prayer so that you get the house.
Comment Written 17-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2017
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Hi, Marie;
Thank you so much. I'm pretty sure we will know something before the weekend is over.
Good thing there's lots of television I want to watch!
~patty~
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Cinquain. The process of buying a house can be quite a long wait to be approved. I truly hope that your dream house may soon be yours.
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2017
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A very well-written Cinquain. The process of buying a house can be quite a long wait to be approved. I truly hope that your dream house may soon be yours.
Comment Written 17-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2017
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Hi, Sandra;
Thank you so much. I'm pretty sure we will know something before the weekend is over.
Good thing there's lots of television I want to watch!
~patty~
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi, Patty
= Oh, and if crossing my eyes helps, I'm right there for you, too.
= Beautiful kitchen/family room is awesome.
= I love, love brick. Hate to see when peeps paint over it--unless it is really UGLY brick. Love yours.
= You see, I'm thinking of it as 'yours', so you'll have good, positive vibes. (*,*)
Cheers, J
*** Happy Holidays ***
(*.*) A Smile Is A Smile Turned Upside-down (*.*)
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2017
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Hi, Patty
= Oh, and if crossing my eyes helps, I'm right there for you, too.
= Beautiful kitchen/family room is awesome.
= I love, love brick. Hate to see when peeps paint over it--unless it is really UGLY brick. Love yours.
= You see, I'm thinking of it as 'yours', so you'll have good, positive vibes. (*,*)
Cheers, J
*** Happy Holidays ***
(*.*) A Smile Is A Smile Turned Upside-down (*.*)
Comment Written 17-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2017
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Hi, Jax;
Thank you so much. I'm pretty sure we will know something before the weekend is over.
Good thing there's lots of television I want to watch!
~patty~
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
I do believe you are consumed with this, you know a watched pot never boils.lol Nicely done cinquain for the contest spot on syllable count and flow
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2017
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I do believe you are consumed with this, you know a watched pot never boils.lol Nicely done cinquain for the contest spot on syllable count and flow
Comment Written 17-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2017
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Hi, Barb;
Thank you so much. I'm pretty sure we will know something before the weekend is over.
Good thing there's lots of television I want to watch!
~patty~
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Oh, that is gorgeous! I would love that house. I do hope you get it. How long do you think you'll have to wait? Your poem tells us you might be liking it too? A little bit? LOL, Still got my fingers crossed for you. :) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2017
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Oh, that is gorgeous! I would love that house. I do hope you get it. How long do you think you'll have to wait? Your poem tells us you might be liking it too? A little bit? LOL, Still got my fingers crossed for you. :) Sandra xx
Comment Written 17-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2017
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Hi, Sandra;
Thank you so much. I'm pretty sure we will know something before the weekend is over.
Good thing there's lots of television I want to watch!
~patty~
Comment from Hopefully oppressed
That definitely made me feel like you want a better pace to live. You certainly wrote this well.
fare warning when the water heater/furnace/range and other stuff breaks, you have to pay for it. lol
having a garden is nice, a water heater is $1000 installed
Sorry if you can"t tell I recently had to buy a water heater. LOL
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2017
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That definitely made me feel like you want a better pace to live. You certainly wrote this well.
fare warning when the water heater/furnace/range and other stuff breaks, you have to pay for it. lol
having a garden is nice, a water heater is $1000 installed
Sorry if you can"t tell I recently had to buy a water heater. LOL
Comment Written 17-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2017
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Hi there;
Thank you so much. I'm pretty sure we will know something before the weekend is over.
Good thing there's lots of television I want to watch!
~patty~
(Checked the water heater - its in good shape!)
Comment from Sharon Haiste
Hang in there, Girl. It will happen.
Meanwhile, good job in putting your stress into your artistry.
A nicely written Cinquain Poem for the contest.
If that is a picture of the actual house, lucky you.
Sharon
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2017
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Hang in there, Girl. It will happen.
Meanwhile, good job in putting your stress into your artistry.
A nicely written Cinquain Poem for the contest.
If that is a picture of the actual house, lucky you.
Sharon
Comment Written 17-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2017
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Hi, Sharon;
Thank you so much. I'm pretty sure we will know something before the weekend is over.
Good thing there's lots of television I want to watch!
~patty~
