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My Book of Poems 2010-2017

Viewing comments for Chapter 70 "Patiently waiting..."
a collection of my poetry

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Comment from apky
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This particular open plan room with the French windows and the fireplace looks absolutely forgeous, Patty

And of course I'll keep my fingers crossed and, best of all, say a prayer for you.

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 18-Nov-2017
    Hi, Aki;
    Thank you so much for the support and prayers. I'm just marking the time until Sunday afternoon - we should have a decision by then.

    I appreciate your good wishes. I love the picture of the family room and the kitchen - it just looks homey,

    ~patty~
Comment from Rasmine
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Good luck with looking. Okay, just don't buy a haunted house -- sorry I love the haunted house movies :P It seems that the people always look and love the house to find out it's haunted. Okay, this is silly! :P Just trying to be silly at this time.
I hope you get all you want, plus a swimming pool and fireplace -- umm, jacuzzi too. :P

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 18-Nov-2017
    Hi Nome;
    Thank you so much for your support. We have found the one house we are concentrating on now, and then we probably won't be looking again until after the first of the year.

    ~patty~
Comment from robyn corum
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Patty,

Is that image really from the house you are considering buying ??? If so, I can easily see why you are so in love with this place. It's GORGEOUS! Sending you much luck!! (Keeping my fingers crossed, too. -- not my toes, that makes me walk funny. heehee) Thanks!

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 18-Nov-2017
    Hi, Robyn;
    Yes! This is a shot from the family room with its own fireplace. The kitchen is a bit smaller than I'd really like, but it has a formal dining room that we 'could' push into if I really want.

    Oh, it is amazing ---- best features, central air conditioning and a completely fenced yard for Howie and Bernie.

    I should know something by the end of the weekend,

    Thank you for your well wishes,

    ~patty~
Comment from Ulla
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Hi Patty, I'm there with you, and I'm crossing my fingers for you. I hope you'll be lucky. I'm in the same position at the moment hoping to buy a house for myself. All best. Ulla:)))

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 18-Nov-2017
    Hi there;
    Thank you so much for the support. We should know something on this house by Sunday evening - if this isn't going to work, we will just wait until after Christmas,

    ~patty~
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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I am praying. I could never live in an apartment. My pets would not be happy, so I would not be happy. I enjoyed reading your contest entry and wish you the best of luck with the contest and house hunting.

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 18-Nov-2017
    Hi, Barbara;
    Thank you so much for your support. I think Howie and Bernie will love having a fenced yard to run around in. They do well in the apartment - well, except for the noises. Bernie is such a good watchdog, he spends a lot of the time growling.

    We should know something tomorrow,

    ~patty~
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
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Excellent work well done this is a great example of this type of poem and written exceptionally well, moving can be stressful but wonderful too, well done kindest regards Meia xx

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 18-Nov-2017
    Hi, Meia;
    Thank you so much for your kind words,

    ~patty~
Comment from rtobaygo
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Good morning, Patty or should I say Mrs. prolific writer?

You captured the excitement of buying a new home and all the possible pleasures that come with it.

Besides a wedding and the birth of children, there's nothing like the joy and pride of buying a new home.

Take care and stay safe,

Ray

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 18-Nov-2017
    Hi, Ray;
    Thank you so much for the good wishes. I loved your remark about my prolific writing - I have posted a lot this week.

    Thank you for supporting my writing.

    I'm putting together a list of FanStory addresses for a Christmas card exchange - if you feel so inclined, send me a PM with your mailing address and your email address so I can send you the addresses of others who have chosen to participate.

    ~patty~
reply by rtobaygo on 18-Nov-2017
    Good morning, Patty

    Would love to. Not wishing to show my ignorance was does PM stand for. Here is my email address:

    rtobaygo gmail.com

    Take care and stay safe,

    Ray
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2017
    PM stands for Private Message by using the 'Contact' feature on a person's profile.

    Thanks for your email - ~p~
Comment from marybell1
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I enjoyed reading your cinquain poem "Patiently waiting". You had the correct number of lines and syllables correct for this genre. I also liked your choice of picture.
All the best.
Marybell1.

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 18-Nov-2017
    Hi there;
    Since writing this, we have heard back and made a counter offer -- we should have an answer by Sunday.

    Doing my best to keep calm. Writing, writing, writing.

    ~patty~
reply by marybell1 on 19-Nov-2017
    All the best
    Marybell1.
Comment from lyenochka
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OK! Just said a prayer that you'll get it. Perhaps it would help if you write a short story or poem to go with the offer. I've heard that Portland home sellers had so many offers that additional essays of why they should sell to that particular buyer was based on the written essay! :))

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 18-Nov-2017
    Hi there;
    Since writing this, we have heard back and made a counter offer -- we should have an answer by Sunday.

    Doing my best to keep calm. Writing, writing, writing.

    ~patty~
Comment from kiwigirl2821
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Oh Patty am so crossing my fingers for you if this is true that you want to buy a house. I can't imagine having to pay rent anymore. Good luck. I truly love this write. xoxo deborah

 Comment Written 17-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 18-Nov-2017
    Hi, deborah;
    Since writing this, we have heard back and made a counter offer -- we should have an answer by Sunday.

    Doing my best to keep calm. Writing, writing, writing.

    ~patty~