Comment from MJ McIntire

Excellent

This poem sounds like what's in my head. This is a beautiful room. I like the doors letting in all the light.

Good Luck.
Mj

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 21-Nov-2017

Hi there;
Thank you so much for reading my little poem. I appreciate your time and review,

~patty~

Comment from Bichon

Excellent

I'm sure a lot of people will be able to relate to this. I do love living in a house, but I've seen some cozy apartments too. I think a house is for me though!

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 20-Nov-2017

Hi, Chloe;
We didn't get the cute little house; rats! So, we are looking again. If nothing pans out this week, we will look again after Christmas,

~patty~

Comment from RGstar

Excellent

I smile at this one patty. Cheered me. Nicely said. Well, I guess, I can't choose, but would love to.
Lovely thoughts.
Hope you get there, if is the case.
Bravo.
Have a beautiful Sunday, Patty.
RGstar

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 20-Nov-2017

Hi RG;
Sadly, the other offer got the house --- so, I'm back to looking,

~patty~

reply by RGstar on 20-Nov-2017

:( keep hunting...you'll get there.

Comment from Bucketlist

Exceptional

and a prayer for your new home purchase offer acceptance . Thanks for sharing. Increasingly people want/need to get from
Inconsideration, noise pollution etc from other people.
Hugs,Trisha
That house looks beautiful = less coffee time!

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 19-Nov-2017

Hi, Trisha;

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. We should have some sort of an answer within the next twelve hours as to whether or not our offer was accepted.

If not, we will be putting things off until after the holidays,

~patty~
Thank you so much for the six star rating

Comment from robina1978

Excellent

An excellent photo of a house. It complements your poem perfectly. I can relate to what you wrote, all of it. You want a house, a garden, and a garage, so your dog can run. It fulfils the requirements of a Cinquain Poem. Best wishes for the contest.

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 19-Nov-2017

Hi there;
This is THE house. Our offer is in, and we should have an answer within the next twelve hours.

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing,

~patty~

Comment from Asem.inspirations

Excellent

Hey, Patty: I can see why you are so impatient and anxious. This house is marvelous - I hate to use this statement in reference to it, but it is to die for! I wish I could buy something this marvelous. I agree with you, apartment living stinks. You are so deserving of this. I will try not to forget to include you in my prayers. WOW!

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 19-Nov-2017

Hi, Tier;
Thank you so much for reading, reviewing and praying. You should see the rest of the pictures inside and out. It is perfect for us; the yard is low maintenance, and the rooms are bright and airy. There's a garden window in the kitchen and two fireplaces - one in the family room and one in the living room.

It's been about fifteen years since we've owned a house and we are both more than ready.

Thank you again for the prayers - we should know if our offer is accepted in about twelve hours,

~patty~

Comment from LateBloomer

Excellent

Hello Mustandpatty1029, And so the home buying saga continues. Home inspections can be scary, but they are also so freeing once the report is read. Nice cinquain format and accompanying photo. Of special note:

Apartment living sucks

(It does, especially the yearly rental increases.)

I have every confidence in the process. You'll be fine.
Good luck. I hope that you've found your "Forever Home."
LateBloomer

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 18-Nov-2017

Hi there;
Thank you so much for your support. We should have an answer on our offer by tomorrow evening,

~patty~

reply by LateBloomer on 18-Nov-2017

When it comes to real estate, a person needs to have nerves of steel. Smiles, Bloomer

Comment from writerjen

Excellent

I like this poem a lot. It's a great cinquain...amazing how you did that so well. Great subject, too...once you're ready to move it's hard to wait. Well done.

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 18-Nov-2017

Hi there;
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I greatly appreciate your support and I continue to wait...

~patty~

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

Patty, This is another very pretty picture of the house you want to buy. I am praying my friend. If this is the one the Lord wants you and your husband to have it will happen my friend. Patience is hard to have at times, but it is so worth it. Just hang in there my friend! love, Teri

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 18-Nov-2017

Hi, Teri;
Thank you so much for your support. I've been doing my best to keep busy and tomorrow will be a long day, too. However, I have to agree with you - if this is the right house, then it will happen.

Have a wonderful weekend!

~patty~

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

Good luck with the house buy. When we find a house we like, we're on pins and needles till we know if the offer has been accepted. It looks like a nice house. Marilyn

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 18-Nov-2017

Hi, Marilyn;
Thank you so much for the support. We should know something one way or the other tomorrow and then I will start the process of packing and stuff. I know all I can do is wait, and if its right, then all good things will happen.

~patty~