Comment from angel123

Excellent

I enjoyed reading your meaningful poem. It flows with truth and your artwork choice goes well with your message. I like your rhyming and good use of alliteration of d letters with dead deer. I wish they would ban hunting.

 Comment Written 17-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 17-Nov-2017

Thank you so much for your read and your kind review. Very encouraging. I so agree with your wish. Note Trump's latest removing the ban on trophy hunting. We are really going the wrong way.

Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

A grim but good Septolet Poem with a clear story.
The picture is vibrant and lovely.
Good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 17-Nov-2017

Thank you for your read and the comments.

Comment from RodG

Excellent

A very impressive septolet! You vividly describe this scene in only 14 words. Despite the author's query in the description, the Speaker/Observer is totally objective, allowing the reader to reach his own conclusions. Rod

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 16-Nov-2017

Hey, thanks, Rod, for the read and your kind words.

Comment from Mustang Patty

Excellent

Dear Anonymous Poet;
Thank you for sharing your Septolet for the contest. The poem is well-structured and meets the requirements of the poetic form, but I didn't like the subject.

But, I'm reviewing the writing and not the opinion of hunting; good luck in the contest,

~patty~

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 16-Nov-2017

Thanks, I don't like the subject either. I don't understanding killing beautiful animals. This is an anti-hunting effort.