Comment from evesayshi

Excellent

In my opinion, what can I say - this is a charming and hopeful write, well constructed in its smoothly poetic style - fully compliant with the prompt. Best of luck in your new home and the contest, Patty...Eve

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 16-Nov-2017

Hi there;
Thank you so much for reading, reviewing and your good luck wishes,

~patty~
(Just waiting to hear back from our offer.)

reply by evesayshi on 17-Nov-2017

You are very welcome, Patty, and my best wishes regarding acceptance of your offer and in the contest, too...Eve

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Good luck with it Patty, I always found house hunting an arduous task! But it seems you are super excited, I think you mean 'looking at a house this afternoon', I wish you well, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 16-Nov-2017

Hi there;
Thank you so much for reading, reviewing and your good luck wishes,

~patty~
(Just waiting to hear back from our offer.)

thanks for catching the nit

Comment from smileycloud

Excellent

blessings to you/family and all your dealings
prayers that all goes smoothly and with the excitement you are showing in your poem
great looking cool and comfortable home in the pic
good luck
it looks a very friendly hospitable home
have a smiley day
blessings
Lorraine

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 17-Nov-2017

Hi there;
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. We just put in our offer and we are waiting to see if they will accept or counter - I will post updates. I was just so happy to find everything on my wishlist in the perfect price range.

~patty~

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

Patty, This is a great six word poem with some really great news! I do hope all goes well for you and your husband. I will say a prayer for you! Very pretty house! love, Teri

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 16-Nov-2017

Hi, Teri;
Thank you so much for reading, reviewing and your good luck wishes - especially appreciate the prayer,

~patty~

Comment from Sasha

Excellent

Great entry for this 6 word contest and I will keep my fingers crossed that, this time, you get what you have been looking for and at the price you hoped for. Nice work with this one too.

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 16-Nov-2017

Hi, Sasha;
Thank you so much for reading, reviewing and your good luck wishes - especially appreciate the prayer,

~patty~

Comment from jenintorre

Excellent

It looks like a great house and a great one line poem. It has given you inspiration to write about your excitement in finding it. Good luck with the co petition and the house.

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 16-Nov-2017

Hi there;
Thank you so much for reading, reviewing and your good wishes,

~patty~

Comment from royowen

Excellent

There's nothing better than finding the house of one's dreams...and at a good price, well done, we've been living in the same place since 1977, our girls grew up here, I don't think they'd let us sell it. Well done Patty, blessings, Roy

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 16-Nov-2017

Hi, Roy; fingers crossed - we extend our offer this afternoon. Hopefully, all goes smooth.

~patty~

reply by royowen on 16-Nov-2017

Good luck

Comment from rjuselius

Excellent

this is a fine commercial of something you desire dear patty! i hope you get it. nice alliteration bu the way.
thank you for sharing!
good luck!
blessings and a big squeeze!
rebekka x

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 16-Nov-2017

Hi rebekka;
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I appreciate your good wishes,

~patty~

Comment from Dorothy Farrell

Excellent

Hi Patty, you have written a six word poem - not easy to get a message across with so few words but you have. Well done - and a biographical one to boot! Hope it all goes well for you - lovely picture of a very nice bungalow. Good luck with both the house purchase and the contest. Warm regards Dorothy xx

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 16-Nov-2017

Hi, Dorothy;
Thank you so much for reading, reviewing, and your good wishes,

~patty~

Comment from apky

Excellent

Well done, good for you.
The one in the pick does look like
the sort of bungalow I need soon,
if I want to avoid having a Lifta constructed
on the stairway!

Excellent work with the six words.

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 16-Nov-2017

Hi, Aki;
That's exactly why we're going to a one-story. Arthritis in my knees and ankles is getting ridiculous,

~patty~

reply by apky on 17-Nov-2017

Hahaha, when I read the "one-story" I sort of went : Heh? Until I remembered that American have the ground floor as the first floor...

Have a fab weekend ahead.