My Book of Poems 2010-2017
Viewing comments for Chapter 71 "Super Excitement"a collection of my poetry
53 total reviews
Comment from mermaids
Looks great. Congrats on finding your dream home. Excellent six word entry for the contest and a positive one that makes the reader feel happy. This is a great event for this time of year.
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2017
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Looks great. Congrats on finding your dream home. Excellent six word entry for the contest and a positive one that makes the reader feel happy. This is a great event for this time of year.
Comment Written 17-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2017
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Hi there;
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I'm pretty sure we will know something before the weekend is over.
Good thing there's lots of television I want to watch!
~patty~
Comment from Boogienights
Congratulations, I hope it becomes yours! In only one line you managed convey your excitement, what a big step in life! I wish you luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2017
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Congratulations, I hope it becomes yours! In only one line you managed convey your excitement, what a big step in life! I wish you luck in the contest.
Comment Written 17-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2017
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Hi there;
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I'm pretty sure we will know something before the weekend is over.
Good thing there's lots of television I want to watch!
~patty~
Comment from robina1978
The photo is from an awful nice house. It complements your post for the Flash Fiction Club perfectly. I'd like t live there too, also have to put it on our wish list. I liked your six word story a lot. Best wishes for the challenge.
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2017
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The photo is from an awful nice house. It complements your post for the Flash Fiction Club perfectly. I'd like t live there too, also have to put it on our wish list. I liked your six word story a lot. Best wishes for the challenge.
Comment Written 17-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2017
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Hi there;
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I'm pretty sure we will know something before the weekend is over.
Good thing there's lots of television I want to watch!
~patty~
Comment from Bill O'Bier
Hello Patty:
Good luck on your house search. Here's a quote I like very much about home- "A house is made of walls and beams; a home is built with love and dreams."
All the best to you and happy Thanksgiving.
Bill~
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2017
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Hello Patty:
Good luck on your house search. Here's a quote I like very much about home- "A house is made of walls and beams; a home is built with love and dreams."
All the best to you and happy Thanksgiving.
Bill~
Comment Written 17-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2017
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Hi, Bill;
Thank you so much for reading, reviewing AND your good wishes. We haven't owned our own home for over fifteen years, so we are VERY excited.
Thank you for the quote - I love it!
~patty~
Comment from Ben Colder
Once you settle it in your spirit, it will become yours. Don't waver, just believe and it will happen. Been there done that. It works. Best to you.
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2017
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Once you settle it in your spirit, it will become yours. Don't waver, just believe and it will happen. Been there done that. It works. Best to you.
Comment Written 17-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2017
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Hi, Ben;
Thank you so much for reading, reviewing AND your good wishes. We haven't owned our own home for over fifteen years, so we are VERY excited.
~patty~
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I trust you will succeed
Comment from JanPerry
...so did you get it? Are you in it?
Lovely exterior. Or is it another house. It's hard to get the right one but thank god for the internet. You received All time best for this little piece. Lucky you!
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2017
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...so did you get it? Are you in it?
Lovely exterior. Or is it another house. It's hard to get the right one but thank god for the internet. You received All time best for this little piece. Lucky you!
Comment Written 17-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2017
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Hi, Jan;
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. We just put in our offer and we are waiting to see if they will accept or counter - I will post updates. I was just so happy to find everything on my wishlist in the perfect price range.
~patty~
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It's hard to find the right house, good luck Patty
Comment from PoemsOfDD
Mustangpatty, looks like a pretty house to be swooping in on. Best of luck on the house buy and for sharing your excitement in your six word poem. ~DD
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2017
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Mustangpatty, looks like a pretty house to be swooping in on. Best of luck on the house buy and for sharing your excitement in your six word poem. ~DD
Comment Written 17-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2017
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Hi there;
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. We just put in our offer and we are waiting to see if they will accept or counter - I will post updates. I was just so happy to find everything on my wishlist in the perfect price range.
~patty~
Comment from rtobaygo
Good morning, Patty
You definitely captured the essence of a six word story, as the last line leads to many possibilities. Congratulations on the purchase of your new home! Nothing like it in the world.
Take care and stay safe,
Ray
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2017
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Good morning, Patty
You definitely captured the essence of a six word story, as the last line leads to many possibilities. Congratulations on the purchase of your new home! Nothing like it in the world.
Take care and stay safe,
Ray
Comment Written 17-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2017
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Hi there;
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. We just put in our offer and we are waiting to see if they will accept or counter - I will post updates. I was just so happy to find everything on my wishlist in the perfect price range.
~patty~
Comment from Heather Knight
Buying a house is one of the most stressful and exciting events in our lives. I wish you luck.
Your little story is very good. It's incredible how much can be said using just six words.
Thanks for taking part in this event.
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2017
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Buying a house is one of the most stressful and exciting events in our lives. I wish you luck.
Your little story is very good. It's incredible how much can be said using just six words.
Thanks for taking part in this event.
Comment Written 17-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2017
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Hi there;
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. We just put in our offer and we are waiting to see if they will accept or counter - I will post updates. I was just so happy to find everything on my wishlist in the perfect price range.
~patty~
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I can imagine. I do hope you get the house in the end.
Comment from emptypage
Wow!!! Hope you get it... if this is a true fact of your life, and not just a storyline. It looks nice. I absolutely adore the tree, love the windows... and do I see a chimney???
Good luck!
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2017
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Wow!!! Hope you get it... if this is a true fact of your life, and not just a storyline. It looks nice. I absolutely adore the tree, love the windows... and do I see a chimney???
Good luck!
Comment Written 17-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2017
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Hi there;
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. We just put in our offer and we are waiting to see if they will accept or counter - I will post updates. I was just so happy to find everything on my wishlist in the perfect price range.
~patty~
You see 2 chimneys-fireplaces in both the living room and family room
