First Law of Nature
nature haiku contest entry6 total reviews
Comment from BeasPeas
Your haiku on nature is very well written. That's nature for you. Wildlife has a tough time to survive in its habitat and from humans. It's a struggle each day. I have to avoid watching those nature shows on TV because I can't stand to see the kill even though I know it's true. Artwork is beautiful. Much luck in the contest. Marilyn
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2017
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Your haiku on nature is very well written. That's nature for you. Wildlife has a tough time to survive in its habitat and from humans. It's a struggle each day. I have to avoid watching those nature shows on TV because I can't stand to see the kill even though I know it's true. Artwork is beautiful. Much luck in the contest. Marilyn
Comment Written 18-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2017
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Thank you for sharing my haiku and your very kind praise, Marilyn. I have a bird feeder in my backyard and too often I find bloody feathers in the snow. I, loathe, the harshness of nature's law. Rod
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I agree. Animals have a tough time of it. Every day for them is a challenge.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written haiku. The law of nature is that the food chain will be from the smallest and weakest to the biggest and strongest. The preditors will find their prey when they need to feed themselves.
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2017
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A very well-written haiku. The law of nature is that the food chain will be from the smallest and weakest to the biggest and strongest. The preditors will find their prey when they need to feed themselves.
Comment Written 16-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2017
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Thank you for your insightful review of my haiku, Sandra.
Comment from Dean Kuch
Nature can be quite cruel at times it seems.
Really it is simply the natural order of things, survival of the fittest.
You gotta eat, a fox gotta eat...all God's chil'ern gotta eat.
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2017
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Nature can be quite cruel at times it seems.
Really it is simply the natural order of things, survival of the fittest.
You gotta eat, a fox gotta eat...all God's chil'ern gotta eat.
Comment Written 16-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2017
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Thank you, Dean, for sharing my haiku and your amusing review.
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The pleasure was all mine.
Comment from writerjen
Your poem started out so picturesque then turned graphic...ha. Nicely done. Real life portrayal, I guess. Great picture which enhanced the story of the poem. Well done.
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2017
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Your poem started out so picturesque then turned graphic...ha. Nicely done. Real life portrayal, I guess. Great picture which enhanced the story of the poem. Well done.
Comment Written 15-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2017
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Thank you for sharing my haiku, writerjen. Yes, real life encountered unexpectedly is often an unpleasant sight.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
A good Nature Haiku entry painting the picture of Nature's honesty.
Beautiful picture.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2017
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A good Nature Haiku entry painting the picture of Nature's honesty.
Beautiful picture.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 15-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2017
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Thank you for sharing my haiku, Sharon. I truly appreciate your kind praise.
Comment from prettybluebirds
Excellent. There is not a lot one can say about these short poems, but I did enjoy this one and it is a good entry for the contest. I wish you the best of luck.
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2017
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Excellent. There is not a lot one can say about these short poems, but I did enjoy this one and it is a good entry for the contest. I wish you the best of luck.
Comment Written 15-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2017
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Thank you for sharing my haiku. I am delighted you enjoyed it and appreciate your best wishes.
