Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very well written ABC poem about Santa and his one time visit every year. You used very good descriptive wording with great art work. Best wishes in the contest. Teri

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 20-Nov-2017

Hi, Teri;
I'm glad you enjoyed my ABC poem.

~patty~

Comment from sfharper

Excellent

Good use of rhyme and form. The lighthearted tone goes well with the holiday content. It is easy to read and shares a positive outlook. I loved the photo. Nice work, enjoyable read.

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 16-Nov-2017

Hi there;
Thank you so much for reading my little poem,

~patty~

Comment from smileycloud

Excellent

great story
the ABC poem is a good entry
I have never seen stealthy kicks but it works and blends in fine
have a smiley day
Christmas Eve sounds lovely

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 16-Nov-2017

Hi there;
thank you so much for reading my poem,

~patty~

Comment from frierajac

Excellent

The reader has to go figure why the children may be vexed at the Santa. It may be because of the sugar content of the kicks and to the character of this rendition of the Santa myth. The foremat is fine. Good luck.

 Comment Written 15-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 16-Nov-2017

Hi there;
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing my poem,

~patty~

Comment from Bichon

Excellent

A wonderful and jolly poem. Christmas is really only around the corner now, wow! This year has flew.
I hope all is doing okay with you, I have been off for the past week so I have some catching up to do!

 Comment Written 15-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 15-Nov-2017

Hi, Chloe;
Thank you so much for reading my Christmas poem,

~patty~

Comment from rtobaygo

Excellent

Good morning, Patty

Ahh, your version of the night before Christmas. I was a bit confused when you said, stockings hung, children vexed why would the children experience irritation? Enjoyed the poem.

Take care and stay safe,

Ray

 Comment Written 15-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 15-Nov-2017

Hi, Ray;

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I appreciate your comments,

~patty~
kids only get irritated because the stockings aren't full enough!

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

This fits the ABC poem structure. I think there's some humor intended because it seems that Santa Claus is being more of a Scrooge here taking candy from the stockings? Or is he just rearranging them? Anyway, the "children are vexed!" Good rhymes in such a short poem!

 Comment Written 15-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 15-Nov-2017

Hi there;
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I appreciate your comments,

~patty~

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written ABC poem about the great excitement of Christmas Eve. The whole family gather around the tree to wait for Santa to come hand out the stockings and presents.

 Comment Written 14-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 15-Nov-2017

Hi, Sandra;
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I appreciate your comments,

~patty~

Comment from davisr (Rhonda)

Excellent

Another cute poem about Christmas.

I love this time of year, and for all the wonderful poems and stories.

A really good ABC poem that ties in the theme for the season, and satisfies the requirements of the contest. Which by the way, good luck in it.

Take care,
Rhonda

 Comment Written 14-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 14-Nov-2017

Hi there;
Thank you so much for the lovely review and well wishes in the contest,

~patty~

reply by davisr (Rhonda) on 14-Nov-2017

I'm waiting on the third installment of your story...

Comment from sunnilicious

Excellent

I love Christmas... And the holidays are here with Santa at the mall. Buy 3 cards at Hallmark and get 2 bowls for $9.99.

Great presentation as the picture & color scheme are so festive. Nice font choice too. And such a busy man Santa really is... Can't be all smiles when there's plenty to do even if it's fun, candy and games. Enjoyable poem to read.

 Comment Written 14-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 14-Nov-2017

Hi there;
I'm glad you enjoyed my Christmas Eve Poem,

~patty~