Politically Correct
My definition of a Lie28 total reviews
Comment from RPSaxena
Hello Kahpot,
It's a nice short piece of poetry meeting the required norms, and transparently depicting its theme.
A tough task indeed!
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2017
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Hello Kahpot,
It's a nice short piece of poetry meeting the required norms, and transparently depicting its theme.
A tough task indeed!
Comment Written 28-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2017
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thank you, I think this was just some thing I could not get out of my head****kahpot
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Kahpot, Most Welcome!
~ RP
Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
Ahh... Nicely done, how you phrased that, very cool, also very true. lol Certainly politically correct. ~Kerry
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2017
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Ahh... Nicely done, how you phrased that, very cool, also very true. lol Certainly politically correct. ~Kerry
Comment Written 28-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from fastdigits
Rates up there with, "how do you tell that an attorney is lying" When he moves his lips. And then so many of these wonderful ladies and gentlemen are also lawyers, so what can one expect?
Well done
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2017
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Rates up there with, "how do you tell that an attorney is lying" When he moves his lips. And then so many of these wonderful ladies and gentlemen are also lawyers, so what can one expect?
Well done
Comment Written 27-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from B.B. Rose
I agree with your sentiments, but as an old time conservative writer of English, beg for "his or her" instead of "their" I wonder if any one else will object. And, actually, since I am a female, I would have put just "his." But that's being sexist which is not allowed these days. B.B. Rose
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2017
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I agree with your sentiments, but as an old time conservative writer of English, beg for "his or her" instead of "their" I wonder if any one else will object. And, actually, since I am a female, I would have put just "his." But that's being sexist which is not allowed these days. B.B. Rose
Comment Written 27-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2017
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Thank you, and I thought of putting "His" but then thought there are many Female politicians, so I was stumped****kahpot
Comment from Liberty Justice
Short but sweet, making a strong conviction statement. Writer hopes next politician opens his or her mouth will be telling the truth. Strong contrast of the words "lie" and "truth" brings emphasis to leading the people correctly. truly, liberty justice
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2017
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Short but sweet, making a strong conviction statement. Writer hopes next politician opens his or her mouth will be telling the truth. Strong contrast of the words "lie" and "truth" brings emphasis to leading the people correctly. truly, liberty justice
Comment Written 27-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Antonym poem. It is one of the hardest things for a politician, to tell the truth, and act on their words to prove they will do what they said at any cost.
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2017
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A very well-written Antonym poem. It is one of the hardest things for a politician, to tell the truth, and act on their words to prove they will do what they said at any cost.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2017
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Thank you very much, and yes I agree****kahpot
Comment from lyenochka
I do agree with the message of the poem which seems to say that politicians lie. But I do think they lie when they "open their mouths." (suggest mouths not mouth). And though the meaning is opposite in "lie" vs " true," one is a verb or a noun and the other is an adjective. I would think you would want both adjectives or both nouns.
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2017
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I do agree with the message of the poem which seems to say that politicians lie. But I do think they lie when they "open their mouths." (suggest mouths not mouth). And though the meaning is opposite in "lie" vs " true," one is a verb or a noun and the other is an adjective. I would think you would want both adjectives or both nouns.
Comment Written 26-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2017
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Thank you very much, and I see what you mean, I will have another look, many thanks for your help****kahpot
Comment from Irish Rain
I see exactly what you mean. I am so done with politics, and am getting to where I could care less...I'll just water my flowers in the summer, watch the starry skies in the winter. But, this is so true. Blessings....
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2017
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I see exactly what you mean. I am so done with politics, and am getting to where I could care less...I'll just water my flowers in the summer, watch the starry skies in the winter. But, this is so true. Blessings....
Comment Written 26-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, so sad, but true. It shouldn't be this way, and your poem brings this home, succinctly, with no hostility, just a simple statement of fact, in lyrical tone - complies perfectly and agreeably with the prompt. Best of luck in the contest...
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2017
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In my opinion, so sad, but true. It shouldn't be this way, and your poem brings this home, succinctly, with no hostility, just a simple statement of fact, in lyrical tone - complies perfectly and agreeably with the prompt. Best of luck in the contest...
Comment Written 26-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
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You are very welcome...Eve
Comment from ronnie k
LIE< TRUE, I love the view, I too believe that the works that grow in their LOL, has a life true can be a lie and lie can be true for sure,
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2017
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LIE< TRUE, I love the view, I too believe that the works that grow in their LOL, has a life true can be a lie and lie can be true for sure,
Comment Written 26-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
