Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

A good and colorful poem for the Unrequited Love contest.
I love the picture.
The poem says a lot, with a lot of feeling.
Good job.
And good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon

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 Comment Written 13-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 14-Nov-2017

Thank you for the best wishes. It means a lot to me to hear from fellow writers.

Comment from expressions9

Exceptional

Dear Writer
Wow! You have penned a poem that truly fits the prompt PERFECTLY!
The imagery in your words is excellent, thoroughly describing the way all the emotions of a heart filled with unrequitted love. This is captivating...your words truly paint the picture!

"My heart longs to tell him of my love,
but this he must never know.
For he doesn't return this feeling,
though everyday my love for him grows in leaps and bounds.
With so much love in one small heart,
I wonder why it does not burst...............(amazing!!)

A brilliant write ... this deserves to win!

All the best in the contest!
Christine

 Comment Written 13-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 14-Nov-2017

Thank you so much for the nice review and the six stars! You don't know how much I appreciate it.

reply by expressions9 on 29-Mar-2018

You're very welcome!