It Was Love at First Whiff
A Dalmatian joins the family.3 total reviews
Comment from sfharper
Enjoyed the humorous take on the unusual love affair. The photo suits the poem well. I like how the dog keeps trying but ends where it begins enjoyable read of this unrequited love poem.
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2017
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Enjoyed the humorous take on the unusual love affair. The photo suits the poem well. I like how the dog keeps trying but ends where it begins enjoyable read of this unrequited love poem.
Comment Written 15-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2017
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Thank you for the excellent review, SF
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You are welcome Ogden
Comment from Mimi Linny
Enjoyed this great little poem about Spot and his unrequited love of the "cat!" This was a very cleverly written piece with some nicely rhymed sequences. I think that with a little tweeking of some of the lines, the rhythm would make for a little smoother read; however, still loved the story this poem told! Great job!
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2017
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Enjoyed this great little poem about Spot and his unrequited love of the "cat!" This was a very cleverly written piece with some nicely rhymed sequences. I think that with a little tweeking of some of the lines, the rhythm would make for a little smoother read; however, still loved the story this poem told! Great job!
Comment Written 14-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2017
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Thank you for the excellent review and your suggestion, Mimi. You were right. I did some tweaking, as best i could, and I think It did do some good.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
A cute poem about unrequited love and poor spot.
Cute picture.
I found this font a little bit hard to read though.
Good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2017
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A cute poem about unrequited love and poor spot.
Cute picture.
I found this font a little bit hard to read though.
Good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 14-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2017
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I really appreciate your complimentary comments, Sharon. (The font is the standard "Cursive," used extensively.)
Judging from your review, I'm hoping the disparaging four-star rating was a slip of the finger. If so, please upgrade to the more respectable five stars, which will be helpful to my overall rating. Thanks.
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