Temptation Is Written on His Face
Roscoe sizes up the situation.3 total reviews
Comment from Sharon Haiste
Temptation and a major delima.
The picture is just too cute. The poem as well.
Well done and good luck to you in the competition.
Sharon
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2017
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Temptation and a major delima.
The picture is just too cute. The poem as well.
Well done and good luck to you in the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 14-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2017
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Thank you for your encouraging review, Sharon.
Comment from marybell1
I enjoyed reading your temptation poem "Temptation is written on his Face". You chose a very appropriate picture. Just on thing in line three - a typo "i".
All the best.
Marybell1.
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2017
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I enjoyed reading your temptation poem "Temptation is written on his Face". You chose a very appropriate picture. Just on thing in line three - a typo "i".
All the best.
Marybell1.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2017
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Thanks for the much-appreciated heads-up, Marybell, and for letting me know you enjoyed the poem.
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You are most welcome.
Marybell1.
Comment from Picture this
A delightful read, leaving me in a state of anticipation. Maybe an extension could be considered, or another photo posted to tell it all. You have captured the innocence of decision making and the logical thinking of a young mind. Thank you.
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2017
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A delightful read, leaving me in a state of anticipation. Maybe an extension could be considered, or another photo posted to tell it all. You have captured the innocence of decision making and the logical thinking of a young mind. Thank you.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2017
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Thank you for taking the time to review,, and for your interesting suggestions..
