When We Met
This is the true story of how I met my husband of 38 years.18 total reviews
Comment from jenintorre
I really enjoyed reading your romantic poem. It is a very uplifting true story. I have just noticed that you won the competition. So congratulations to you.
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2017
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I really enjoyed reading your romantic poem. It is a very uplifting true story. I have just noticed that you won the competition. So congratulations to you.
Comment Written 15-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2017
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Thank you so much! It means a lot to me to hear from fellow writers.
Comment from Asem.inspirations
Awwwwww! What a precious and adorable love story. I loved this so much and it's no wonder that you won the first prize for this poem. We had a Security key staff and a cleaning team at FIT college. So I could clearly imagine your set up. How wonderful and cute.
This reminds me of one of my husbands. (lol) He used to be the Computer Technicians of the facility that I used to work at. When I would arrive to work, my computer would somehow always need repair. It would be fine the day and night before I left. However, each day when I returned to work something else was wrong with my computer and I need my computer to run the program I was heading.
So I would have to call him to my office every to repair it so that I could get start my days work. I found out later that he was causing my computer problems to see me everyday. We stated dating and were married in a year.
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2017
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Awwwwww! What a precious and adorable love story. I loved this so much and it's no wonder that you won the first prize for this poem. We had a Security key staff and a cleaning team at FIT college. So I could clearly imagine your set up. How wonderful and cute.
This reminds me of one of my husbands. (lol) He used to be the Computer Technicians of the facility that I used to work at. When I would arrive to work, my computer would somehow always need repair. It would be fine the day and night before I left. However, each day when I returned to work something else was wrong with my computer and I need my computer to run the program I was heading.
So I would have to call him to my office every to repair it so that I could get start my days work. I found out later that he was causing my computer problems to see me everyday. We stated dating and were married in a year.
Comment Written 15-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2017
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That's a fantastic story! I can't believe now that I actually locked those doors, but I was 17 and bold at the time, lol. Thank you so much for the nice review, I always appreciate it. :)
Comment from Ogden
Congratulations on your well-earned first place finish.
The story sounds authentic, and if it is, that was pretty sneaky of you, Boogienights!
;)
Don (aka Ogden)
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2017
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Congratulations on your well-earned first place finish.
The story sounds authentic, and if it is, that was pretty sneaky of you, Boogienights!
;)
Don (aka Ogden)
Comment Written 15-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2017
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Thanks for reading my poem. I was 17 at the time and pretty bold, thank goodness
it turned out well! Thanks again, I really aporeciate it.
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You are very welcome.
Comment from Irish Rain
I just love this!! Beautiful picture!! A man in uniform, they'll steal your heart every time!! How clever to lock all those doors, ha ha. Congratulations on this win, most deserving!! Blessings...
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2017
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I just love this!! Beautiful picture!! A man in uniform, they'll steal your heart every time!! How clever to lock all those doors, ha ha. Congratulations on this win, most deserving!! Blessings...
Comment Written 14-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2017
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Thank you so much for your kind words.
Comment from angel123
Your Light and Sweet poem flows and rhymes beautifully and your message of love is endearing. I enjoyed reading it and it is well received. I also like your artwork choice. Good luck in the contest. Best wishes!
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2017
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Your Light and Sweet poem flows and rhymes beautifully and your message of love is endearing. I enjoyed reading it and it is well received. I also like your artwork choice. Good luck in the contest. Best wishes!
Comment Written 13-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2017
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Thank you for reading and reviewing my poem, and for your kind words.
Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
Awe... This is such a sweet love story, my friend. I wish you the best of luck in the contest is certainly is light and sweet and filled with romance in a lovely flowing rhythm. ~Kerry
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2017
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Awe... This is such a sweet love story, my friend. I wish you the best of luck in the contest is certainly is light and sweet and filled with romance in a lovely flowing rhythm. ~Kerry
Comment Written 13-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2017
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Thank you so much for such a nice review.
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Your very welcome:)
Comment from Liberty Justice
BEAUTIFUL! I feel the love and compassion in this poem. Indeed, it is light and sweet and photo and words tell a lovely love story. Just viewed competition and my thumbs up launched you forward. Go look. Congrats I think you're going to win by yourself. Tell me who you are after contest. lol liberty justice
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2017
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BEAUTIFUL! I feel the love and compassion in this poem. Indeed, it is light and sweet and photo and words tell a lovely love story. Just viewed competition and my thumbs up launched you forward. Go look. Congrats I think you're going to win by yourself. Tell me who you are after contest. lol liberty justice
Comment Written 13-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2017
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Thank you so much for such a wonderful review and for your vote. :)
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
That is so nice. What a romantic story poem, and I'm guessing it's true. Well done on your conniving scheme, lol, you certainly meant to catch your man. And you wrote a wonderful poem about it. I love true stories, and this one was lovely. Good luck in the contest. You have my vote. xx Sandra x
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2017
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That is so nice. What a romantic story poem, and I'm guessing it's true. Well done on your conniving scheme, lol, you certainly meant to catch your man. And you wrote a wonderful poem about it. I love true stories, and this one was lovely. Good luck in the contest. You have my vote. xx Sandra x
Comment Written 13-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2017
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Thanks so much for your kind review and your vote, I really appreciate it.
Comment from robyn corum
Dear Mystery Writer,
I definitely think this poem fills the requirements of being a light and sweet (and precious!) love poem. This was fabulously entertaining. I enjoyed!
Favorite line:
You left but left me breathless, I fell for you on sight.
Thanks and good luck
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2017
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Dear Mystery Writer,
I definitely think this poem fills the requirements of being a light and sweet (and precious!) love poem. This was fabulously entertaining. I enjoyed!
Favorite line:
You left but left me breathless, I fell for you on sight.
Thanks and good luck
Comment Written 13-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2017
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Thanks so much for reading and reviewing my poem, I really appreciate your kind words.
Comment from kiwigirl2821
Such a gorgeous bride and groom. You both look like you're ready to face the world ð?¤? I enjoyed the story and poetic art that you've shared. Good luck. xoxo be Kiwi
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2017
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Such a gorgeous bride and groom. You both look like you're ready to face the world ð?¤? I enjoyed the story and poetic art that you've shared. Good luck. xoxo be Kiwi
Comment Written 13-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2017
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Thank you so much.We don't quite look the same today, but I still think he's the handsomest man I've ever met. :)
