FAMILY TIES.
Viewing comments for Chapter 59 "I'm Sorry""ALL IN THE FAMILY."
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Comment from Chrissy710
Hi ronnie69 You know this is good and I smiled whrn reading your two way conversation Very cleve and many a man could identify with the man working hard all day and then too tired for his family. We all need time out to do things with family despite the business becuase it is too late to go back So your poem is a good reminder LOL forget Mackers Good luck in the contest Cheers Christine
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Hi ronnie69 You know this is good and I smiled whrn reading your two way conversation Very cleve and many a man could identify with the man working hard all day and then too tired for his family. We all need time out to do things with family despite the business becuase it is too late to go back So your poem is a good reminder LOL forget Mackers Good luck in the contest Cheers Christine
Comment Written 11-Nov-2017
Comment from emptypage
I like this. It wasn't what I expected at all. It is earthy and real and it carried me from start to finish. The imagery was vivid. You did a great job. Good luck in the contest.
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I like this. It wasn't what I expected at all. It is earthy and real and it carried me from start to finish. The imagery was vivid. You did a great job. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 11-Nov-2017
Comment from Cybertron1986
Beautiful and very relatable. I can tell this was written from the heart of one who has been there, such as myself. Reading it through a second time, it almost had me crying. Nicely done
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Beautiful and very relatable. I can tell this was written from the heart of one who has been there, such as myself. Reading it through a second time, it almost had me crying. Nicely done
Comment Written 11-Nov-2017
Comment from Ricky1024
You can walk out this ride hi Ronnie I just want to know exactly when you wrote this if it was for your own dad then it would be, thanks for not giving peace for being an orca dad holic but it was well written I enjoyed it and there's nothing wrong with McDonald's these days billions and billions of customers so this was written with great descriptive measures theme and imagery flowed well read well no grammar issues thanks for this talk to Ricky 1024
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You can walk out this ride hi Ronnie I just want to know exactly when you wrote this if it was for your own dad then it would be, thanks for not giving peace for being an orca dad holic but it was well written I enjoyed it and there's nothing wrong with McDonald's these days billions and billions of customers so this was written with great descriptive measures theme and imagery flowed well read well no grammar issues thanks for this talk to Ricky 1024
Comment Written 11-Nov-2017
