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Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
There were a lot of little things that I saw and posted below. If this is about actual people I'd suggest using fake names if you didn't already. Heroin is a scary thing and I'm glad I never got caught up in it.
three, weeks, (you have an extra comma)
daughter Lorrn (I think you spelled Loren wrong)
thirty, year old, (extra comma)
five, year old, (extra comma)
seventeen, year, (same extra comma)
masked, men (I wouldn't put a comma here)
"But, shd (she)
as a hslf (half)
Twenty, years." (no comma and twenty doesn't have to be capitalized)
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2017
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There were a lot of little things that I saw and posted below. If this is about actual people I'd suggest using fake names if you didn't already. Heroin is a scary thing and I'm glad I never got caught up in it.
three, weeks, (you have an extra comma)
daughter Lorrn (I think you spelled Loren wrong)
thirty, year old, (extra comma)
five, year old, (extra comma)
seventeen, year, (same extra comma)
masked, men (I wouldn't put a comma here)
"But, shd (she)
as a hslf (half)
Twenty, years." (no comma and twenty doesn't have to be capitalized)
Comment Written 12-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2017
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Hello and thanks for your kind review but I disagree with basically everything you said firstly this is pissed listed as nonfiction which means it is true so I can only the characters in this are all deceased including my son and wife and that was friends with Lauren and Angela I don't think Angela sister Rebecca would disagree to have this sad story told to help others involved in drugs with you said that you know nothing about this is a five and six star review peace on the first page in the first position a fanstory it has garnered almost enough reviews for Blue Ribbon which it will and then and all times best so I picked up a couple of hours that I missed I didn't misspell Lauren number one unless you read it on a previously earlier time before I caught someone because it was talked into a cell phone which I won't use spell check because it's hard to read so I would suggest you reread it thoroughly this time try to understand the meaning behind it and the Seven laws of beautification and give it to properly reviewed it deserves but of course as a review year able and capable of reviewing it with any amounts of accreditation that you would like which personally between you and me doesn't really matter thanks talk to Ricky 1024 review and review is coming through a cell phone with run in sentences no commas. Exclamation points excetera and possible misspelled grammar issues
Comment from LIJ Red
Too many quote marks and the unusual format makes for uneven reading, but the story is true to life and needs telling. Excellent description of drugs in action.
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2017
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Too many quote marks and the unusual format makes for uneven reading, but the story is true to life and needs telling. Excellent description of drugs in action.
Comment Written 12-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2017
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Quotes?"
Just me being me?"
Mentally,Yours,
Ricky...
Comment from H. Rebecca
"It was ftom a broken Heart...
typo
Three tragic stories. I would stay away from dating sites if I were you. Putting them down on paper can help you heal. All the best to you.
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2017
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"It was ftom a broken Heart...
typo
Three tragic stories. I would stay away from dating sites if I were you. Putting them down on paper can help you heal. All the best to you.
Comment Written 12-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2017
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So true Rebecca
And, thanks...
Ricky..
Finally redemption from a beautiful woman!!!
Love ya babe...
Ricky .
Comment from justjo66
I wondered if these three stories were fictional or true. No matter they are true enough with our society these days. Our son took a shotgun and blew his brains out over a loss of his marriage after 17 years. Yes, he was drunk but not an alcoholic. He had been on drugs in the past but had cleaned himself up to work as a postman in a small town. He, too, was handsome and talented and had a family that loved him dearly. It has been 16 years Christmas day night since this happened and I can tell you the pain never goes away. Hope in Jesus is what we hold dear...that we hope to see him again in Heaven. We pray he was saved...it is not an unforgivable sin as some think. At one time he did accept Jesus as his Savior.
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2017
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I wondered if these three stories were fictional or true. No matter they are true enough with our society these days. Our son took a shotgun and blew his brains out over a loss of his marriage after 17 years. Yes, he was drunk but not an alcoholic. He had been on drugs in the past but had cleaned himself up to work as a postman in a small town. He, too, was handsome and talented and had a family that loved him dearly. It has been 16 years Christmas day night since this happened and I can tell you the pain never goes away. Hope in Jesus is what we hold dear...that we hope to see him again in Heaven. We pray he was saved...it is not an unforgivable sin as some think. At one time he did accept Jesus as his Savior.
Comment Written 12-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2017
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Sorry for your loss my son was in a car accident I just use his picture for the death of his friend Christopher was the attic and of course his mother Brandon was so distressed she was the one that took the gun to her brain which by the way all these stories are true thanks dr. Ricky 1024 and have a wonderful November
Comment from Liberty Justice
My, my, Dr. Ricky, such a glowing script or story of tragic events in Brenda and Christopher's life. Yes, drugs will destroy the mind. Your biographical accounts of people's choices are so realistic and vivid. Your story serves to bring attention to misuse of drugs. lol liberty justice How are you doing, really?
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2017
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My, my, Dr. Ricky, such a glowing script or story of tragic events in Brenda and Christopher's life. Yes, drugs will destroy the mind. Your biographical accounts of people's choices are so realistic and vivid. Your story serves to bring attention to misuse of drugs. lol liberty justice How are you doing, really?
Comment Written 12-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2017
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Thanks again for the double dose of reviews their Liberty doctor Ricky
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I can never understand why people start taking drugs when they know where it leads to. It's so sad, if my children had gone down that road, I'd have been devastated, but we can't watch them all the time. Your friends certainly went through the mill, Jay was killed in an accident, which still would have devastated me as a parent. He is alive in you, my friend. Sandra xx
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2017
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I can never understand why people start taking drugs when they know where it leads to. It's so sad, if my children had gone down that road, I'd have been devastated, but we can't watch them all the time. Your friends certainly went through the mill, Jay was killed in an accident, which still would have devastated me as a parent. He is alive in you, my friend. Sandra xx
Comment Written 12-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2017
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Here's an example of those last few words you said he is alive in you written on April 14th 2003 less than two weeks after the donation of Jason two organs to save for lives a competition palm tree in our society of poetry in DC at the Hilton on Connecticut Avenue competition consist of 7,500 people vying for 10 prizes this received one silver bowl of my name congratulations intitle buddy friend I'm not here right now but I'm not far I'm in a place close by not far like a star you feel this place just take a moment and you'll see then you'll know just where I'll be your friend Jay
Comment from RGstar
My word, this is a lot of information here, and though I see some strong writing and links to interesting reading, the red text and the many quotation marks, not really used for what they should, makes this difficult reading. A little better formatting and different colour will ease the mind into a more relaxing read.
Still, I found pockets of interesting reading.
My best wishes.
RGstar
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2017
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My word, this is a lot of information here, and though I see some strong writing and links to interesting reading, the red text and the many quotation marks, not really used for what they should, makes this difficult reading. A little better formatting and different colour will ease the mind into a more relaxing read.
Still, I found pockets of interesting reading.
My best wishes.
RGstar
Comment Written 12-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2017
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Thanks RG star sometimes I utilize Red Dead of turquoise with the black background for attention and also for the serious matter of the writing and as I reread of course it's from my cell phone and not from your computer it looked viewable enough to be reviewed properly the letters a little tiny bit seem to blend depending on your vision thanks dr. Ricky 1024 review interview coming through a cell phone when running sentences no! Commas or periods Etc and possible grammar issues
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Thanks Ricky, completely understand. Thanks for explaining...now clearer.
My best wishes.
RG
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, a very long read - certainly a worthy and imaginative effort, but the drug scene is such a common one in today's world, that there was no singular moment that captivated me in particular, as the reader...
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reply by the author on 12-Nov-2017
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In my opinion, a very long read - certainly a worthy and imaginative effort, but the drug scene is such a common one in today's world, that there was no singular moment that captivated me in particular, as the reader...
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 12-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2017
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Thanks for your time sorry you didn't enjoy my five and six star piece that's on the first page in the very first position it will probably be getting all time best in blue ribbons tomorrow and it could go on there probably about 100 reviews like most of my work doesn't when I boost it I'm sorry that you thought it was not worthy or deep enough about the addiction in the world today which is a very important subject but apparently it's never touched your life sorry that you didn't enjoy it but I'm glad it hasn't touched your life doctor Ricky 1024
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You are very welcome, Ricky, and I provided my opinion, which doesn't include all the other FanStorians on the site, or your own subjective opinion. But, you really should not speak out of turn as you did, since you don't know me personally. My daughter was an addict and died in 2008. She was my only child, and her name was Sabrina Camille Scaccia...Eve
Comment from visionary1234
Dr Ricky, your writing is certainly unique but this entry would be far better in the prose section, without all the distracting upper case and quotation marks. You have a story to tell, so tell it in the best medium. Let the reader emotionally relate to clear, crisp writing for the best emotional impact, I think.
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reply by the author on 12-Nov-2017
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Dr Ricky, your writing is certainly unique but this entry would be far better in the prose section, without all the distracting upper case and quotation marks. You have a story to tell, so tell it in the best medium. Let the reader emotionally relate to clear, crisp writing for the best emotional impact, I think.
ð???Sharyn
Comment Written 12-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2017
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Well my dear we all have our own peculiar in particular Styles the way I write to emphasize my words that are important to me show The Importance to the reviewer I'm sorry that you didn't understand that but that's your personal opinion this poem by the way is on the first page in the second position could Garner up to 80 reviews it's already had many five and six star reviews I never review based on Grammer or grammar issues or punctuations or whatever especially like right now I'm talking to cell phone said it will be running sentences no punctuations abbreviations commas periods exclamation points and run in sentences so as you're confusing your reading and trying to understand because of course that's what your problem was reading addictive Lee yours you missed the whole storyline in the depths of this wonderful and Incredibly needed peace in this today sorry World dr. Ricky
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Good Lord!
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi, Ricky
= Drugs are no joke.
= It's so sad the way kids think they can try them -- for fun -- have complete control.
= In realty, they become lost, as did my youngest son. Haven't heard from him in years. He's lost in his world.
= Drugs destroy the person taking them -- the family who tries to help and cope -- yet, in the end, God is in full control. What will be ... will be.
Cheers, J
Have a good day/evening!
(*>*) A Smile Is A Frown Upside Town (*>*)
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2017
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Hi, Ricky
= Drugs are no joke.
= It's so sad the way kids think they can try them -- for fun -- have complete control.
= In realty, they become lost, as did my youngest son. Haven't heard from him in years. He's lost in his world.
= Drugs destroy the person taking them -- the family who tries to help and cope -- yet, in the end, God is in full control. What will be ... will be.
Cheers, J
Have a good day/evening!
(*>*) A Smile Is A Frown Upside Town (*>*)
Comment Written 11-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2017
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Sorry Jacks to hear that you have a child who's lost sometimes they need a little time to suffer before they grow just like a flower it starts from a seed and it needs to be nourished and once the nourishment process happens the flower will Bloom he will Bloom but not until he's out of the danger of the drugs that's where you come in as her as his mother he needs to be lost and then found and then put into a rehab my situation to rehab was basically two years of jail it killed me coming to the county to visit twice a week and then for a whole half year I had no contact only one or two written words until the release I feel your sun is close to that stage now so try to find him and then get him the help he needs he has been wilting long enough thanks for your kind thoughts and review and educated peace on your job your youngest son talk to Ricky 1024
