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Follow Your Dreams

A tetractys, 5 line poem

7 total reviews 
Comment from BeasPeas
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Hi June. Congratulations on your win with this fine tetractys on following our dreams. Nicely composed with a positive message of encouragement. Marilyn

 Comment Written 13-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 13-Nov-2017
    Thank you very much!
Comment from sfharper
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Wonderful message of finding the ability to fly from the nervous and beautiful butterflies inside. It makes good use of the form and of the photo which is lovely. I find the tone peaceful and very easy to read, enjoyed it.

 Comment Written 12-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 12-Nov-2017
    Thank you. We all have the ability to rise above any occasion to fly to other places to pursue our dreams.
reply by sfharper on 12-Nov-2017
    You are welcome
Comment from Liberty Justice
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Ooh, ooh, now that's BEAUTIFUL, and it even looks magical. Looks like a good luck charm. Love your title, also giving hope and spiritual inspiration to your readers. Photo looks lovely. You got my thumbs up that launched you forward. WELL DONE! lol liberty justice

 Comment Written 12-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 12-Nov-2017
    Thank you! We all have that special something inside us to inspire us to imagine, create, and fly. Just look for it.
Comment from Sharon Meda
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A good Tetractys contest entry.
Very colorful.
The picture is beautiful and matches perfectly.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 10-Nov-2017
    Thank you for your encouraging feedback!
Comment from RodG
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I like this imaginative way of personifying that wondrous thing within us that inspires our dreams and prods us to follow them. The picture makes "it" visible.

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 10-Nov-2017
    Yes, we all need that little something inside us to give us that extra push to imagine, create and fly. Thank you for your insights.
reply by RodG on 10-Nov-2017
    My pleasure. Rod
Comment from Oliveforlove
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I like the flow and the gentleness of the words, giving a sense of the butterfly. The structure works too though if there was a comma after within rather than enjambment the next line has a growing power and confidence to it.

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 10-Nov-2017
    I think you're right about the comma. Appreciate your taking the time to read and offer your insights.
Comment from mermaids
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There is a good feeling that comes through your words. I like the image of the butterfly within us. Your poetic form is unique and adds to the strength of the poem.

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 10-Nov-2017
    Thank you so much for your positive feedback!