Comment from Dutchie

Excellent

Hi Ine. I'm not sure, but is this about the realistic art in the shop window made by an artist in the eighties? I saw it on the news this week. It was very realistic and some people wondered if it was art. Fia xxx

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 10-Nov-2017

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great weekend. Yes, we saw it too.

Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

A good four line poem following the syllable count. You've told the story.
Well done. But I don't see the baby. Is he in the buggy?
Sharon

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 10-Nov-2017

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great weekend. I can' see her either, see Thomas Bow's review.

Comment from kiwisteveh

Good

I'm afraid that you have just confused me with this. I have no idea what's going on or who the little boy may have been that you're referring to.

Your syllable count is correct and the presentation is attractive.

Steve

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 Comment Written 10-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 10-Nov-2017

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great weekend.

Comment from Thomas Bowling

Excellent

I used to like Louis CK. When he wrote his first book and was paid a million dollars for it, he gave half of it to his staff. He said he never had money and didn't know what to do with it. He sounded like a nice guy. I guess he's a nice guy with a serious problem.

Harvey Weinstein owes a thank you to Kevin Spacey for getting his name off the news, and Kevin Spacey owes a thank you to Louis CK.

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 10-Nov-2017

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great weekend. You gave me some extra information, thanks.

Comment from Sis Cat

Excellent

Yes, I heard about C. K. Louis and am appalled. I can't believe he made such a movie. It is odd but not surprising that art imitated life. You describe him:

did this baby boy
make people shout/cry
he was in a pushchair shop window

His antics remind me exhibitionist prostitutes in the shop windows of Amsterdam.

You did an admirable job here questioning his art.

Thank you for sharing. I wish you contest success with this fine entry.

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 10-Nov-2017

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great weekend.

Comment from royowen

Excellent

I'm not absolutely sure what your poem is about Ine, but I take it it was about some show or other. But this certainly is a qualifier in this contest, well done, good luck my friend, blessings, Roy

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 Comment Written 10-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 10-Nov-2017

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great weekend. Look at Thomas Bow's review please.

reply by royowen on 10-Nov-2017

Welcome