Daisies
Enduring love.20 total reviews
Comment from Asem.inspirations
Hello there, Maria: What you wrote for this picture is so beautiful. You used it to describe your love in the most special ways. You imagery was perfect in comparing the wonderfulness of the kind of love you get from your loving one. It is lovely and I loved it.
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2017
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Hello there, Maria: What you wrote for this picture is so beautiful. You used it to describe your love in the most special ways. You imagery was perfect in comparing the wonderfulness of the kind of love you get from your loving one. It is lovely and I loved it.
Comment Written 13-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2017
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I'm glad you liked it, Tier. Thanks for your review.
Comment from Walu Feral
G'day Maria.
Very nicely done and a great addition to the picture this challenge. This is different to all of the other entries and is beautifully written with lovely, touching sentiment.
Great job, my friend.
Cheers Fez
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2017
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G'day Maria.
Very nicely done and a great addition to the picture this challenge. This is different to all of the other entries and is beautifully written with lovely, touching sentiment.
Great job, my friend.
Cheers Fez
Comment Written 13-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2017
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Thanks, Fez.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
A nice poem about your love and daisies.
Thank you for sharing this, it matches the picture wonderfully.
Challenge met, I believe.
Sharon
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2017
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A nice poem about your love and daisies.
Thank you for sharing this, it matches the picture wonderfully.
Challenge met, I believe.
Sharon
Comment Written 12-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2017
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Thanks for the extremely generous review, Sharon.
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
AAAAhhhh this is precious and the content is very well done telling what your love is to you. I love the progression leading up to the last couple of lines that concludes it. Nicely done
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2017
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AAAAhhhh this is precious and the content is very well done telling what your love is to you. I love the progression leading up to the last couple of lines that concludes it. Nicely done
Comment Written 11-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2017
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Thanks, Barb. Have a nice Sunday.
Comment from Bucketlist
Ironic that you wrote about love, and vitality, and I about the memorial wall in DC. I thought your poem was uplifting about love, and romance all with the same guy!'! Romance is like a garden to me. You plant the seeds of attraction, nurture them, You reap what you sow, and love will grow. Daisies was a good entry for pic this. Thanks for sharing
Hugs, Trisha
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2017
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Ironic that you wrote about love, and vitality, and I about the memorial wall in DC. I thought your poem was uplifting about love, and romance all with the same guy!'! Romance is like a garden to me. You plant the seeds of attraction, nurture them, You reap what you sow, and love will grow. Daisies was a good entry for pic this. Thanks for sharing
Hugs, Trisha
Comment Written 11-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2017
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Thanks for your review, Trisha.
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You are welcome
Comment from DR DIP
nice write Maria Your writing is getting better every time I read it and you are being versatile with your style and form. Initially I thought the double up of the line he makes me smile was too much But then I read it again and now can see why you did it.He dries my tears,
He makes me smile.
He brings me daisies,
He makes me smile.
thanks for sharing
dip
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2017
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nice write Maria Your writing is getting better every time I read it and you are being versatile with your style and form. Initially I thought the double up of the line he makes me smile was too much But then I read it again and now can see why you did it.He dries my tears,
He makes me smile.
He brings me daisies,
He makes me smile.
thanks for sharing
dip
Comment Written 10-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2017
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Thanks for your kind review, Mark. I'm glad you think I'm improving. That's all I want.
Comment from smileycloud
Once again this is such deeply profound messages of the nature of the world depicting the values of a loved one or the Lord
I have only just realized that this is about the third or fourth poem of yours that I have enjoyed about the daisies and their precious value
I am now, after all this time, imagining that this is a series you have going here, LOL
I am now especially pleased that I am your fan because I would be sad to any in that series
blessings
have a smiley day
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2017
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Once again this is such deeply profound messages of the nature of the world depicting the values of a loved one or the Lord
I have only just realized that this is about the third or fourth poem of yours that I have enjoyed about the daisies and their precious value
I am now, after all this time, imagining that this is a series you have going here, LOL
I am now especially pleased that I am your fan because I would be sad to any in that series
blessings
have a smiley day
Comment Written 10-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2017
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It's not a series, it must have been a coincidence... I hadn't even noticed myself ;)
Thanks for your review.
Comment from aryr
This was indeed a different take on the picture, but I did find it enjoyable and interesting. It portrayed a true love, true devotion, true commitment. Very well done and appreciated.
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2017
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This was indeed a different take on the picture, but I did find it enjoyable and interesting. It portrayed a true love, true devotion, true commitment. Very well done and appreciated.
Comment Written 10-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2017
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Thanks, Aryr.
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Most welcome Maria.
Comment from BeasPeas
Hi Maria. This is a lovely poem for the Picture This post. Your theme of enduring love is carried throughout the poem with excellent word choices. The last 3 lines are the very best. That's what love is about:
"My love is like the earth.
Always generous,
Always fair."
Marilyn
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2017
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Hi Maria. This is a lovely poem for the Picture This post. Your theme of enduring love is carried throughout the poem with excellent word choices. The last 3 lines are the very best. That's what love is about:
"My love is like the earth.
Always generous,
Always fair."
Marilyn
Comment Written 10-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2017
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Thanks for reading, Marilyn.
Comment from Irish Rain
Yes, how wonderful. The Earth, the seas, the air, all work together, as does a couple going in the same direction. Softly lovely. Blessings...
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2017
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Yes, how wonderful. The Earth, the seas, the air, all work together, as does a couple going in the same direction. Softly lovely. Blessings...
Comment Written 10-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2017
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Thanks for reading. Have a lovely day.
