FAMILY TIES.
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Comment from Air Spirit
Your poem was not only drafted well, but it was full of zest and life - akin to your poem...and the fireworks picture is bright, bold and as beautiful as the Diwali Feast celebration sounds! Thanks for sharing!
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Your poem was not only drafted well, but it was full of zest and life - akin to your poem...and the fireworks picture is bright, bold and as beautiful as the Diwali Feast celebration sounds! Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 02-Oct-2018
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about the Diwali feast of lights. It seems it is a special feast where everybody are drawn to the lights. Congrtatulations on winning the contest.
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A very well-written poem about the Diwali feast of lights. It seems it is a special feast where everybody are drawn to the lights. Congrtatulations on winning the contest.
Comment Written 02-Oct-2018
Comment from Julie Pie
This poem was very enjoyable to read. The descriptions paint a picture of all that is going on, and the rhythm to the lines gives the poem a wonderful energy. Excellent work!
Julie
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This poem was very enjoyable to read. The descriptions paint a picture of all that is going on, and the rhythm to the lines gives the poem a wonderful energy. Excellent work!
Julie
Comment Written 02-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2018
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HELLO JULIE PIE: Thank you for viewing my poem. Thank you for the stars. They're very much appreciated. Cordially: rhonnie69.
Comment from Rickie1
rhonnie
Well done. Good rhyming and story line without preaching religion like so many do. Where do you live? I haven't heard of this festival before?
Rickie
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2018
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rhonnie
Well done. Good rhyming and story line without preaching religion like so many do. Where do you live? I haven't heard of this festival before?
Rickie
Comment Written 02-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2018
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HELLO RICKIE: I live in Pleasantville , New Jersey about six miles outside of Atlantic City, New jersey. I hadn't heard of this festival before either. It came up on the contest page of FanStory. It seemed like an interesting challenge to me...so after going to the library and checking things out...I took a shot at it...and here I am. Thank you for your caring concern. God bless you. Cordially: rhonnie69.
Comment from Gert sherwood
Congratulations rhonnie69
for being the winner of Diwali (Festival of Lights).
with your excellent format using couplets
Smiles to you.
Gert
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2018
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Congratulations rhonnie69
for being the winner of Diwali (Festival of Lights).
with your excellent format using couplets
Smiles to you.
Gert
Comment Written 02-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2018
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HELLO GERT: I somehow knew that I'd be hearing from my pen-pal fan on this one. Smiles right back to you, Gert. Thank you for the stars.They are very much appreciated. Cordially,Your friend: rhonnie69. P.S. See? I told ya with the kind of help that I get from you...I'd get better. Thanx.
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You are welcome rhonnie69
I have no idea of what I did to help you with your writing?
Gert
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, a delightfully charming and fun write - celebratory in its cultural theme, yet family oriented in its easy and casual rhyming rhythm - another poem with illustrative verse requiring no imagery, but joyful in its complement...
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In my opinion, a delightfully charming and fun write - celebratory in its cultural theme, yet family oriented in its easy and casual rhyming rhythm - another poem with illustrative verse requiring no imagery, but joyful in its complement...
Comment Written 02-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2018
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HELLOEVESAYSHI: Thank you for viewing my poem. Thank you for the stars. They are very much appreciated. Cordially: rhonnie69.
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You are very welcome, Rhonnie, my pleasure...Eve
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Congratulations on your well deserved win! It was a lovely poem, and very interesting, too. I'd never heard of this so I've learnt something as well. It does sound like it's a lot of fun and family joy. Well done!! :)) Sandra xx
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Congratulations on your well deserved win! It was a lovely poem, and very interesting, too. I'd never heard of this so I've learnt something as well. It does sound like it's a lot of fun and family joy. Well done!! :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 02-Oct-2018
Comment from meeshu
sounds like fun, I would love to go. it sounds like Mardi Gras without the beads. a great write that succeeds in celebrating the celebration. good job, rhonnie....................meeshu
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sounds like fun, I would love to go. it sounds like Mardi Gras without the beads. a great write that succeeds in celebrating the celebration. good job, rhonnie....................meeshu
Comment Written 02-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2018
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HELLO MEESHU: Thank you for viewing my poem. Thank you for the stars. They are very much appreciated. Cordially: rhonnie69.
Comment from Miranda Langston
the six-star rating is well earned here. this is an excellent poem and i can see why it won the contest. it's incredible! you're making me want to visit India even more
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the six-star rating is well earned here. this is an excellent poem and i can see why it won the contest. it's incredible! you're making me want to visit India even more
Comment Written 02-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2018
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HELLO MIRANDA: Thank you for viewing my poem. Thank you for the stars. They are very much appreciated. Cordially: rhonnie69.
Comment from loismddavis
this is a new festival for me and though it sounded like lots of fun in your rhyming poem I would have liked a little bit about its origins.
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this is a new festival for me and though it sounded like lots of fun in your rhyming poem I would have liked a little bit about its origins.
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Comment Written 09-Nov-2017
